Contest $75 for Logo + Business Card Design

Rintrus: I like the way you presented your business cards However unfortunately it's not really what I'm looking for sorry

 

Thanks for the feedback, Will add revision soon.!

 

i would like submit an entry,, although i will need a couple days.. please dont close until i submit thanks,,,here are some of my other entries from previous posts
http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=2017513
http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=2003658&page=2

mike

 

Ok guys...... please get your designs/revisions in asap as I would like to close this up within the next 48 hours at most. Thanks!

 

Hey mate, Here you go my revisions,



Switched fonts,

 

Mr.LeGeNd: Thanks a bunch! I think I like the first one the best overall Would I be able to see a business card design with this one plz?

 

Here's my Entry:
I think it's better to bring out the "creativity" in the logo by using more colors to represent the company. The lines create a silhoutte pattern of a condor. I hope you like it.

 

Synchaos: That's not bad at all Like the logo..... though not 100% sold on the business card. Thanks for the cool entry.

 

Thanks for the quick reply! The logo's color and position on the card can be changed (and can be a one-color in UV ink for example).

 

Synchaos: Well it's not the position of the logo on the card, it's just the first part of the card show just seems a bit plain... doesn't draw me in or anything.

 

Synchaos: That's a bit better... thanks

 

Thanks for feedback, Will work on the card now.

 

Here's another possibility, I added streamlines to make it more interesting. (I don't want to add too much elements, I want to keep it a bit clean and look more professional)

 

Synchaos: Thank you. Though I think I still prefer your 2nd one

 

Hey mate, Here you go the card design,





Maybe I will add another try shortly.!

 

Mr.LeGeNd: Thanks for that. Whilst I love the logo, not really over-struck with the business card. Also would probably prefer to use the first logo on the card as well to keep things streamlined.

I'm now thinking maybe I should have split the contests up, one for the logo & one for the business cards - that way I could have picked my favourite logo with worry about the card haha

 

Another try:

 

Mr.LeGeNd:: That's a bit better I prefer the orange color type one best..... would also prefer the card to not actually use the..

Address:
Position:
Website:

parts.... only really need that for the phone portions. Also would prefer to have the position directly under the persons name, so you connect them with their job role better.

One last thing...... back of card is too similar to the front..... back doesn't have to be anything special, just want it to differ from the front.

 

Another try: