Contest $75 Banner Contest - 3 sizes

THis need revision. It is unclear what the banner is selling. Maybe picture of people with diplomas or in graduation cap and gown. Plus text needs to be bigger.

 

This one is REALLY GOOD! The other 2 need more work. See my comments on this thread on what needs to be done. See my comments re other designer's work so you will see what I am looking for. The form banner needs a LOT of work.

 

The problem with the ad above and this ad is that what you are SELLING is UNCLEAR. Needs more ESSAY-driven images or graduation/school images

 

For late applicants, please read my comments/feedback on the other designers' work on this thread.

IF I like your package, I will buy it... in addition to buying the work of the winner of this contest.

 

200x125 2nd Revised

 

Revised
160x600

 

Okay. Much better. Apply this to the other 200 x 125 banners. Thanks

 

Much better but make sure the "admissions essays finder" is bigger and looks like HTML text. Make sure it matches the page font/text of the theme I sent earlier. The name of the WP theme is JAMBO

 

Revised
200x125 3rd

 

Revised
200x125 4th

 

Now , I actually designed this in html

 

another try

 

Revised
468x60

 

Okay, this is good.

 

Okay, this is fine.


Any other contestants? Let me know soon. Contest will be ending soon.

 

wait for mine

 

do let me know .. if any corrections needed

 

Thanks for your entries

Here's my feedback

1) make banners for the other sizes

2) Take out the borders

3) Text and font need more work

4) Find better pictures

 

Please wait for my revised versions.