75$ - 72h - Logo + header contest

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  1. djingel

    djingel Active Member

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    #21
    @jtoms: Looks much better already, 2 suggestions:
    - Could you try something else with the logo? (onlyfights did an ok job on it)
    - Could you try to make the 3D effect better somehow? (like the runners are running not in but on the header)
     
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  2. qw3rt7

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    #22
    OK, here's a revised version, with a little more depth:

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    What do you think?
     
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  3. jtoms

    jtoms Banned

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    #23
    could you please explain more further sir.. i'm lost with that sentence:eek:
     
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  4. djingel

    djingel Active Member

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    #24
    ok: I like it that it looks like the runners are running in a 3D environment in stead of 2D. There seems to be a bit of depth. Could you try to improve this?
     
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  5. jtoms

    jtoms Banned

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    #25
    im not really sure if im on a right path. just comment me for any revisions.

    [​IMG]
     
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    krisdude Well-Known Member

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    #26
    Please wait for my entry. How long is the contest open?
     
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  7. djingel

    djingel Active Member

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    #27
    @Krisdude: ok
    @you love me44 :): ok
    @jtoms: you are on a good way, try to increase the 3D aspect of your entry. Moving the runners a bit more to the center (3D center, like the logo) would help. The logo isn't great.
     
    Last edited: Nov 16, 2009
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  8. you_love_me44

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    #28
    [​IMG]

    i hope you like it
    feedback appreciated
     
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  9. djingel

    djingel Active Member

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    #29
    @you love me44: Nice work, seems you know what you are doing. Try to improve the clarity of the background images like jtoms' work. And try something a bit different with the logo, I really like the work onlyfights did with the logo.
     
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  10. you_love_me44

    you_love_me44 Peon

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    #30
    [​IMG]

    Change the logo a bit, Reduce the size of the open of 7 days a week, darker the sports person images and bg also.
    i hope you like it :)
    Thanks for the feedback
     
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  11. fujimoto

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    #31
    Please wait for my submission, will be done shortly
     
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  12. fujimoto

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    #32
    [​IMG]
     
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    #33
    oh, forgot the phone icon..
     
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    #34
    [​IMG]
     
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    jokomamamita Well-Known Member

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    #35
    Mine:

    [​IMG]
     
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    Pixel Dynamics Active Member

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    #36
    Hello,

    Here is my entry:
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  17. djingel

    djingel Active Member

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    #37
    @you_love_me44: I like the 2nd version you posted with the somewhat darker border, if you could, could you try something different with the logo? (I really like the work onlyfights did with the logo) Also, make the dark sportsmen sharper, without the "speeding lines"

    @fujimoto: good try, but not what I am looking for

    @jokomamamita: good try, but not what I am looking for

    @Pixel Dynamics: cool, finally something different, it looks good, but I am affraid it is too ski oriented. Could you try something different?
     
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  18. you_love_me44

    you_love_me44 Peon

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    #38
    As per your instructions :)

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    Three variations of my last design that you like.

    In all three change the logo style i hope this one you like it and also done sportsmen person sharp.

    Thanks for the feedback
     
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  19. jtoms

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    #39
    [​IMG]
     
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  20. djingel

    djingel Active Member

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    #40
    FYI: Winners at this moment:

    1: onlyfights
    2: you love me (the logo really needs a change)
    3: Jtoms (good job with you last entry, but the logo needs a change)
    4: pixel dynamics

    There is still time enough for new/revised entries... Good luck!
     
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