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Contest $70 US via Paypal to logo design contest winner

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Marvin Cravens, Aug 21, 2015.

  1. Marvin Cravens

    Marvin Cravens Active Member

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    #21
    This has too much of a international hotel chain feel to it. I think the design is really nice just not for an apartment complex on the beach here in Hawaii.
    SEMrush
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #22
    Very nice! I really like it! Simple and works in a variety of colors that will be easy to put on t-shirts, hats, etc. Awesome!
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #23
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #24
    I like the first two designs, but they seem more appropriate for a bar. Could I see the Hanohano Hale part without the tiki head and the apartment below. Hale means house in Hawaiian, and can mean apartment as well, so I don't want to be saying apartment apartment.
    The third concept I think the building doesn't match the rest of the picture. It feels like I am looking at the emerald city in Wizard of Oz while holding a bottle of Malibu Rum.
     
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    #25
    Very nice! My only issue with this is that it looks like a three story house and not an apartment building. I do like how you incorporated the sun, waves, and coconut trees. Could you make the building with a flat top.
     
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    #26
    Awesome! Very simple and bold and will work with a variety of colors and canvases!
     
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    #27
    This is a nice design but looks more like a desert oasis than a tropical beach.
     
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    #28
    Cute design, but I think this would work more for a microbrewery or just another generic sticker you can pick up any tourist spot here in Hawaii. I need something that focuses on the letter H or the name Hanohano Hale.
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #29
    I really like this design, but the hibiscus flower is overly used here in Hawaii, from Hilo Hatties to Hawaiian Airlines. If you google hawaiian ginger or hawaiian breadfruit designs I think they could replace the hibiscus flowers you have used in you logos. If you could also make the second h in Hanohano lower case because it is all one word. Looking forward to your changes!
     
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    #30
    Basically my same comments as your first submission, but I wanted to say I really liked the H in the hibiscus flower outline. In addition to the plants I mentioned before, you can look up lau'ae (a Hawaiian fern) or plumeria, both I think would work well with you outline design with the H inside of it!
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #31
    I don't care for this artistic rendering of the hibiscus flower. As I pointed out in your two other designs, I like the overall concept, just need a different plant/flower.
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #32
    Sorry for the late replies everyone! We had some major rain this weekend that knocked out my wifi at home and I was away from the office for the weekend. For these reasons, I have decided to extend the contest one more day for all of you who have submitted to make the changes I suggested or make new submissions all together. Mahalo for all of your hard work and rain or shine, I will announce the three finalist by Tuesday August 25, 2015 4 pm HST.
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #33
    I really like this as well, but I would like to see it without the rooftop to make the H look less like an A. The birds hammock and sailboat are very creative but not necessary. Also Hanohano is one word so you can take out the -. I would love to see what a nice green would look like instead of the browns, because this side of the island is very lush and green.
     
    Marvin Cravens, Aug 24, 2015 IP
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    #34
    here....
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    #35
    Following your comments, I made a plumeria flower with the H inside of it. I think that this design would work very well for various applications such as embroidery. The H within the flower also stands alone as a logo.
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    #36
    My revision.

    hano hano complex.jpg
    hano hano H.jpg
    I hope you like it..
    With Complex design and initial H
     
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    #37
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    #38
    Here is my entry..
    Hope you like it..

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    Any thing let me know..
    Feed back appreciated..
     
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    #39
    Here is my entry..
    Hope you like it..

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    Any thing let me know..
    Feed back appreciated..
     
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    creativediva Well-Known Member

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    Here is my entry..
    Hope you like it..

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    Any thing let me know..
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