take a look at theses and tell me. they re just concepts. if you like the ideas tell me to improve the gfx. if you don't like em. tell me so I try something diffirent.!!! Im telling you. im just posting my idea ! the finished work won't look like these !!! 1 2 3
Ok guys, where we go again for another feedback batch: @VictoriaAnn: Thanks for the new version, but we meant a fully dark background, not just under the triangle. Can you give it a shot? @V06-TECH: The “eye†is looking better but maybe the font colors should be a bit more sober, less colorful maybe? @mora: Not really into the symbol, although the fonts used are nice. @RNHalawi.com: Looking nice, maybe just try different colors on the symbol? Bit more flashy, more lively? Maybe the complementary colors? @DustyDog: not quite there, too bland, although it’s not bad per se. But maybe a different direction? Or try using stronger colors. @eruct: Nice entry. Try it with different colors though? Like the feedback above, we’re looking for something more strong, more flashy (yet not too much, of course). @rancari: nope.. sorry. @explorer11: Strong entry. No further suggestions, I think the potential of your approach is coming across now. @IM3D: The symbol and the approach are interesting. Could you try it with other colors. Strong entry though. @tGriff: Looking strong as it is. Very good. @omega-ltd: OK, let’s take your word for it and from those you should focus solely on the first idea. Looking forward to see the fully realized version. @tnt-tek: not bad, but the fact that there are FOUR triangles threw us a bit off. @tnt-tek: interesting spin on using the triangle as the ‘A’, but not quite working yet. But we like the approach Cheers!
Cff, thanks for the feedback. I know what you mean when you say my previous attempt is bland, so I have made changes. I've also added a darker background as I noticed you've asked for that from someone else. More vibrant, whilst still retaining a corporate and proffesional look. Feedback appreciated, Phil.
I hadn't thought about the silliness in using 4 triangles. I have reworked with 3 and some negative space. I adjusted the coloring a tad and think this looks a little sharper. Webshots seems to degrade my source somewhat as the previews after uploading look a bit grainy. I'll find a better service to host the pics before I post the update of my other entry.
Thank you for your latest feedback. Here is the logo again as you requested. I have (hopefully) worked around the matter of colours being degraded. There are two here - they have different shadows.
I can't seem to get my images to display so I'm trying again in a new post. I hope it works this time. If you still can't see it, the link is http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b9/vicki_1981/3anglesoftware4.jpg
Hmm. see I tryed my best to fulfill what the original logo design was. But I can see that original designs are turning out much better than what the company had thought up.. i may have to do an original design if i want to win.
Here's a first attempt. If you like the basics, I'll put more time into it, if not, I'll take a stab at a different concept.
Ok, My daughter saw me working on this and wanted to throw in her ideas. She's 8 years old and this is her first public exposure, so be kind.