$70 Logo Contest for farm equipment leasing company

my second entry

 

Here is the modification on the first first logo
http://i39.tinypic.com/jscabm.gif

 

tHIS ONE IS WITH NEW COLORS AND NEW LAYOUT
http://i40.tinypic.com/2wcl0lf.gi

 

Edit: Sorry had to changecolor combination. Here's another entry.

 

IM3D: This last entry is a lot more eyecatching than the original. Id' love to see a little more color added, maybe some of the font in a grey or other organic color. Also, Id love to see the JCM in a Sans-Serif style font.
I'm curious to see what it would look like with some white of the rice showing a little inbetween the rice hulls.
Keep working on this one and scap the originals! Thanks!

rawasia: on your post #22 I like the color contrast with the 'rainbow' effect. I think that would look great on the original design you first posted with the rice on the left side.
Also post #23 this is the strongest design posted so far! Great design, i'm really drawn towards this one, and i have a few ideas to hopefully make it better. Could you move the "Leasing, Inc." to one line. I think that would help a lot. Also if you dont mind id love to see one with just the stem of the rice a darker color "golden yellow" or "brown" so when its real small for business cards it will stilll show up noticably as rice. Nice work!

Th3 KiNg: I really appreciate your entry's, on post #24 i don't see much change with the one on top, I feel the J and M are need to be bold. "equipment leasing, inc" would look better in all caps. And the gear may look better in a slighty lighter or darker shade of the J and M. Not sure if you'd like to continue on or stop here. Up to you.

@Everyone: In my efforts to further inspire you I've included a few more logos that catch my eye in some way. This will be my last post with logos, but I'll continue to give my feedback. Starting to see some good designs, really appreaciate everyones hard work!

 

I think u r preferring the embelem style logos. Anyways. I'll try to come up with a emblem style logo as u won't prefer the text based ones as most of the examples u have shown are emblem based ones so it doesn't make any sense for me to dit the current logo.

 

thanks sir for the positive feedback of my entry.......... so here's my new idea of the revision I've made from what are the commented of it........



Hope you like it.

Regards,
Rice
KEEP IT SIMPLE!!!

 

Here are the adjustments for the designs you mentioned

http://i44.tinypic.com/2zrdon8.gif

 

My Entry:



Feedback is much appreciated.

Thanks,
DrD

 

Another Entry:



-DrD

 

here is my logo design entry...

 

check your PM,

my post haven't enough to post link :

here's my design:
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thank you

 

Your right, i do seem to prefer the emblem style logos. The second one you submited that was all yellow i liked a lot more. Look forward to seeing your next post.

 

logorice: I still don't think that particular tractor feels right, i think a background of a field with green rice sprouting would be cool, maybe a little scenery, sky, etc? The Rice stalks look good, Could you try swaping the green for a lighter shade of green like rawasia used in his designs, either that or grey. I'm not sure i feel the outline on the "JCM" maybe its just the color of it but i'm not sure. Would like to see equipment leasing justified under the JCM. I think those changes and a good background scene would really make it pop! Thanks!

rawasia: In your last post #4 really pops the most. Leave it as is. #3 id love to see one of two things. A the rice stalk change to a lighter tan to compliment the green, or B just make the stem that color and leave the rice white. Leave #1 & #2 as i. Since im going to show those to my client. Great work!

DrDesigner: Post#29 This looks great! The only change i could see is making "JCM" one color. Maybe black or grey. and if it's grey then id imagine "Equipment leasing" would need to be black or another color to compliment the emblem. Really great work! Keep the colors of the Emblem As they look nice together.

Post#30 This looks nice too, i think it would be good to have the rice stalks bend to the oval more, and the background doesn't work for me yet. Maybe the ground could be a light green and work with the sunburst a little more? Equipment leasing, inc. could pop a little more, maybe it just needs to be 1-2px larger?

^ ^DesignGuru: I Really appreciate the effort, but this isn't what my client is looking for. Thanks.

+sugarcane+: This design looks good, but for my client its too much. The detail is simply not going to stand out on a small business card. Would love to see a simplified version of this where there are a few less rice stalks perhaps, and the "equipment leasing, inc" is larger, or Caps. I Appreciate your effort!

@Everyone: As of this evening i will try to pick the top one's whom i want to see a few more revisions. So we can make progress towards wrapping this up. Any members who have not already submitted a design are still welcome to, just keep in mind it will need to be along the same level of quality as the others.

Try to get your submissions/revisions in by this evening, as i will be sharing them with my client tonight!
Hope everyone is having a good weekend!

 

my revision

 

thanks sir and sorry if i cannot get what you want to my entry.......... i hope this one will be in your expectations that always you want to do.......... ehehe





Regards,
Rice
KEEP IT SIMPLE!!!

 

IM3D: I think the wording type and color looks good, but theirs something lacking in the symbol maybe just the color combo or something, im not sure. Maybe its the lines and half arch that bug me? I really don't have any ideas on what to change at this moment.

logorice: On the #1 design your getting the idea i was looking for as for a field/pasture. Id like to see the Sunburst you used on the #2 design on #1. Maybe lose the gold border for something lighter or more cherry. Not sure i like the outline on JCM, and maybe the color of equipment leasing could be the same color as the JCM background color.

On the #2 design I really like the emblem. Keep it as is! The JCM should be a light green or another color that contrasts well, equipment leasing maybe gray? etc? Thanks keep it up!

@Everyone: Will post the designers id like to have go to the final round first thing in the morning.

 

Here are the revisions
http://i41.tinypic.com/2q3vx2q.gif

 

Hi, thanks for the feedback. The "all on one line" can be easily fixed, i done it like this as i assumed it would be utilized to span trucks, buildings, machinery etc.

With the rice, i'm not sure how mine and the ones you suggested differ too much they are all fairly abstract versions rather than realistic representations.

Thanks for the feedback though.

 

Waiting on feedback from client.