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Ok, here comes the feedback so far:
Metallik: I found your design a bit too simple for what I was looking for and compared to the other designs we have had.
Shinan: The color you have used is blue. We wanted to use green as our primary color. Also, the bottom of your design where it has all those links is really not necessary and I can't see there being a need for those links - looks like it seems to have come from some template that you had made up before?
Vtopaloff: Although your design is very similiar to the original design, i like it. it is simple yet bright. don't think you need to change much here.
Joidiamonds: Your design looks too childike and unproffessional, without sounding rude. The links aren't spaced out properly and don't even look like links.
cgoly01: Your design is very good. However, as i think you stated, the links on the left are too light and cannot be seen properly. the rest of your design is good but im not sure about the white header and the white space below the links bar at the top.
Erthy: I really like your design! I like the way you have split up the link sections and have the product spotlight bit at the bottom - however, I wanted the layout of the homepage to run throughout the site and this won't be possible if the links are in the middle of the page. I hope that makes sense.
design_nikki: so far the best design. does a fantastic job of containing all the links in the right places. love the two sets of the same link (home, about us etc). Not sure about the colour scheme though.

AND PLEASE NOTE: if you feel it is worth changing your design based on the feedback above: the company name is "D.S.M. International Inc" and the slogan is "Dead Sea Minerals" So...you can get rid of the Mon Platin etc

Let me know if you have any further questions based on the feedback or if I have left you out.

Thanks

 

Hey what about me??

 

Princemac, Im ever so sorry for forgetting yours. I actually really liked your design but found the green a little too dark as I was looking for a light and bright design. And I'm also not sure about the 3 pictures at the front and Im wondering how they will link to other parts of the site?

 

In order to make it easier for people, I will create a shortlist for entrants tomorrow and will also provide details on how to improve the designs if I think you have a chance of winning. So, until then, it may be best not to work on a design as I do not want to waste anyones time.

 

Ok I'll do a few changes and I'll take the 3 pictures out, I was thinking they could go towards describing your product ie "refreshing body and soul health" like a sentence.

But I'll do a revision...wait for me

Oh is there anything else you would like me to change or add or edit?
Pls let me know either by PM or here.

Thanks,
Mac

 

Here is my revised copy, I have changed quite a lot so I hope you like it




Please provide feedback

 

Hi, you promised some specific feedback today. Thanks,
Mac.

 

Hi there,

Sorry for the delay!
I promised a shortlist of potential winners and they are Princemac, CGoly01 and Franzmand.
Alll your designs are near perfection, its just about choosing which is the best, and this is proving to be the most difficult decision as I don't want anyone to lose for your hardwork!
I wanted to ask the opinion of a couple of other people, to help me make a decision but will get back to you with a winner as soon as I have chosen. Thanks

 

Please wait for me, Im making revisions.

 

Here goes my new one, please consider this.

 

@ Mighty.One - Please provide feedback if possible so that I can improve my design more

 

I know I'm not on the shortlist but I started making this before that post was made so I thought I may as well give it a shot anyway:

 

Here is the template:





Please Provide Feedback

 

@ CH please can you update us with what is happening ...

 

another dead thread??

 

Sorry for the delay everyone! I've been caught up in quite a few things and do sincerely apologise.

I decided not to make any revisions on the designs as they were all really good and it would take really long so i decided on a winner based on just the first design and kept it at that.

Frazmand is the winner.

If you would like to see the completed site with the winning design, then please drop me a message and I will send it to you once its completed.

Once again, sorry for the delay and thank you all for entering!