$60 One Page Design For OnlineCollege.cc (Uncoded)

Here's my try :

- Online College Layout by i7 Click Here -


don't worry about the text it's all just for test
all feedbacks are welcome , EVERYTHING can easily modified

 

An updated entry

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Some hover affects

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Here is my other version
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Feedback appreciated, Changes can be made..
BTW Happy Chinese New Year to all who celebrate it

 

here's my entry:



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Is this contest is still on ?

 

Thanks everyone for being patient. Here is my feedback


FEEDBACK

@kie: In your first design I really like how you made the images look like photos. I also, like how the form and the picture don't crowd each other out. However, I need the photo to match a bit with the logo. Maybe if you found a graduate having fun. Also, this design needs to have a sidebar. Your second design, over comes the problems of your first design. However, it loses the strenth that your first design had--balance between the pictures and the form. Can you put the form between the two pictures (it might still look too crowded but I would like to see). The only other suggestion I have is changing out the first picture where you have four students lined up a in a line. Not really natural in my opinion. Other than those two suggestions I really like this design.

@bizzard: I like this design a lot more. Just two suggestions: 1) I would remove the bubble clock, it just doesn't fit the design. 2) I would remove the graduate cap you have in the body of the text, it also doesn't fit. Hope this helps.

@willhaynes: I really like your form in your first design (draft1copylm8.png). The yellow helps the eye draw naturally to it. I also really like the simplicity of the titles in the sidebar and the body content. However, I don't care for the picture of the grad. She's happy but I need something that shows more the fun side of college. I am a big fan of your second design (draft1copywh2.png). The picture of the two grads is better than in your other design. It definitely shows building friendships in colllege. I also love the graduate badges underneath--nice touch. You did misspell campus in the form, but not a big deal. Also, the borders of the content fade out as you progress down the design. If you could have the lines be defined all the way to the footer that would be great. Oh, I also really like the banner you have in both designs that says "Enroll NOw for huge Savings!" Thank you for both designs.

@i7-GFX: Thank you for your submission. I like how the form in the design is very prominent. The three things that need to change with this design are 1) The picture doesn't fit for a college website. It is more for a business website. 2) The cap in the header seriously limits the navigation by having the tassle designed in the navigation. 3) Finally, the content body is too confined. You have a lot of white space that could be more tied into the overall body of the content. Hope this helps. Thanks, again for your design.

@badmasketa: Thanks for joing the contest! It's obvious you have been in my past contests with the addition of the footer-sidebar you have in this design =) (which I like a lot). I really like how big the form is your design. However, you run into the same problems as i7-GFX by limiting the navigation. Also, if you could have your picture with more than one person that would be great. Other than that great design.

 

Yes, this contest is still going.

 

Thanks for the feedback..will do the revision now

 

Here how is it now?
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FEEDBACK

@kie: I like this design with the changes a lot better. I also like the new picture of the grad throwing the hat. No more changes are needed for this design. I am waiting on the others to submit their changes. Once they do I will make a decision.

 

Thanks for the feedback I have to go to sleep now since its over midnight here

 

Do you need those changes done?
All of them should be pretty easy to visualize.

Of course I would make them if I won.

Will

 

Here is update entry!

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revised one:



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Thanx for the feedbacks , i made another updated versions " different 2 versions "
i can also add another spaces for writing if you need more
also the menu on the right can be replaced with space for writing easily
every thing can easily modified


- Updated Layout V.1 by i7 Click Here -

- Updated Layout V.2 by i7 Click Here -



Feedbacks are welcome

 

WINNERS ANNOUNCED

Usually when I do a contest I get several meaningless submissions that try to pass a free template as their own work. It is refreshing to have a contest void of this, and I appreciate all of you for doing such great quality work. With that said, for this contest I am awarding one winner ($60), and two runner-ups ($10). I appreciate everyone's time and effort with this contest, and I look forward to seeing all of you in my future contests. ~Paul

CHOSEN DESIGNS

Winner ($60): willhaynes
Runner-up ($10): JMN
Runner-up ($10): kie

 

ok i missed it any how this is my effort and congratulations to the winner. Am back again to the forum after all most 4 months due to my studies.

 

sorry ... i am late. entry... withdraw.

 

Hey Paul, thanks for picking me winner.
I'll make the changes you asked for and send you my paypal later on today (it's 5:30am here now )