erenNt, I like the first variation better, a few change requests... 1) It needs to be "squashed" vertically a bit, as the image will need to be on 90px tall by 300 - 400px wide... maybe the logo gets super-imposed behind the name? or intwined in it? Might need to introduce a third color (light gray) to set it off or something 2) Minor detail, but it is "Broussard" with an "r"... 3) The "Troy" font needs to be "heavier" - it's a bit too thin to show up well 4) I like the colors 5) Can you play with a couple of variations of script fonts for the "Broussard" to set it off from the "Troy"? Like you did in the second option, but I don't really like that font - it is too common. The font needs to be a cursive style, somewhat heavy, easily legible and not too fancy. 6) I'd like to incorporate the ".com" at the end of the "Broussard" - probably reverting back to the font/color of the "Troy"... Thanks, This is nice design to build on...
I like the second option better... A few requests... colors - looking for something more professional in the palette, wine colored, dark gray, navy blue, rich golds, etc... some type of incorporated "logo" to make it look like more than a simple font creation A different font for the "TroyBroussard.com" - didn't like this one, it too common, doesn't leave an impression...
numbered as follows 1 to 3 from top to bottom on left, then 4 to 6 from top to bottom on right... 1) Please use the Navy colored flag of number 6 with the rest of number 2. 2) Remove the "www." from the front of www.troybroussard.com 3) Change to "TroyBroussard.com" with caps for "T" and "B" 4) Increase the point size 1 point for the "T" and the "B" to make them stand out. 5) I know that "Broussard" is a font, but is there any way to extend vertically the "d" at the end of Broussard? It appears squashed and almost looks like and "a" 6) Can you try a couple variations on the "tag" that you added? Trying somehow to tie this more into a financial/wealth creation theme
I like the stacking of Troy over Broussard.com. I like the incorporation of a logo. Some suggestions, Colors - Something more professional in the color scheme (see my other posts/suggestions to others) Logo - It looks like a real estate logo - looking for a financial/wealth building theme... Can you play around with some variations on the fonts between Troy and Broussard.com (see my other suggestions within the thread). Maybe like this, "t r o y" (all lower case) and have the "Broussard.com" line up directly with the "y" dropping down. The "t r o y" could be bold, large, and thick, but a faded, subdued gray so that the broussard.com below it "pops" with the bolder color (needs to be a different font though). A good start, thanks...
Sorry, I guess I wasn't clear in my earlier comments - I don't like the "guy"... when I suggested "variations" I meant like "other images" not just variations of the guy in different poses... I like the font of the Troy and I like that it overlaps the "Broussard". I don't like the "Broussard" font and it needs to have the ".com" appended. I'd like to see the Broussard font more of a technical font to contrast more with the script style font of Troy. Thanks
Well, I have a new idea, Let me see what you think about it.. if you don't like it, we can stick to the original one.
I like the color and font for "Broussard"... I'd like to see "TroyBroussard.com" not "troybroussard.com". I'd like to see the "T" and "B" in "TroyBroussard.com" emphasized - maybe bolding just that letter, maybe 1 point bigger than the other letters in TroyBroussard.com. I'm not overly fond of the "warpped" text of Broussard - I like the font, don't like the curvature... I like the way you set "TROY" apart, but I don't care for the font - try some variations and try it all lowercase in some of them as well... Thanks!
Thanks designerboy, but the design is just not speaking to me... has a ring of a "monopoly" theme to it and just comes across as too simplistic - looking for something more elegant... Sorry... Maybe read some of my other comments/suggestions and try something new...
designerboy, This "broussard.com" that you posted as the second variation here, was my favorite... can you try to keep it (I like the navy color) and just do some variations with combining "Troy" with it? I don't like the light blue highlighting... Thanks
Yeah, I do like it... a couple of suggestions... I like this layout and the fonts, but I like the simplier 3 circle logo of the first options... i like the "reflection" I'd like to see the "broussard" a tad thicker (a light bolding)?
Here's the requested version.. I didn't understand what you said about "broussard".. you want it to be Bolder?
Yes, please make broussard a bit bolder - in fact, all three could be a bit bolder, troy, broussard and ".com" coming along nicely... can you somehow compress it more vertically? I need the design to be more of a horizontal design with less vertical height... maybe you can move the logo to the left of Troy to reduce the height? you might try compressing the Troy font or repositioning it to reduce the overall height... can you make the rightmost circle a different, lighter shade of gray? I think this will differentiate it a bit more... I like the idea of the "reflection" but the implementation just isn't working for me, maybe needs to be a little "flatter", a little lighter, etc... can you try a couple variations...