Dakouten - Good, clean...overall looks/feels "sharp". Maybe it's the sharp edges in the image/font? Colors? Power Slave - same comments as above. That cloud looks kind of stormy. Good clean font though. JM Designs - good, clean font and overall style. I don't feel the layout is quite working. Not sure that the drop shadow is helping. kolgames - no thank you. cr70 - I'm not a fan of that style. jeezy17 - The overall layout almost works with the cloud positioning. I know I said your last comp was "too literal"...but maybe a person sleeping on a cloud may work above the text? I like the line style of the cloud in your second attempt better than the "literalness" of your first one. (I hope that makes sense)
Some additional concept ideas and direction... Remember that the feeling of the logo should be that of sleeping on air. Maybe clouds? I invite people to try having a person sleeping on a cloud? Maybe try something slightly whimsical? Maybe a silhouette? I think all the other elements that other people have tried thus far could still work...if presented well. Element ideas... moon, clouds, mattress, person/character sleeping Remember, the font choice is key to conveying the "mood". The visual doesn't need to take center stage.
So here is my concept. I can make some editions if you do not like something. (if you don't like this font, there are some more which I thought would fit here)
Revised entry: Lightened the cloud up a bit, added some z's to represent sleep aswell, can remove these if you don't like them. Again feedback appreciated.
MacRulez - Thank you for the attempt but it's not conveying the professionalism I'm looking for. As for the fonts... the one you used may work without the element on the bottom. As for the other fonts given, the first one is the only other one I would consider trying. JM Designs - the colored santa hat is not working. The font you selected and the way it's presented is ok...but not quite there. Power Slave - The z's are not helping. There is nothing about the logo that says "bed" in any way. (hopefully that comment is not too literal) I invite you to submit a new concept. joidiamonds - that looks like a sun/moon sleeping in the clouds. I'm looking for something more porfessional overall. IM3D - Good attempt...but it doesn't strike me as "it". I'm looking for somethng that says "bed" more. I've seen your portfolio...I really encourage you to keep trying. renderwork - That is more whimsical for sure. Overall seems busy...and I don't think I and a fan of the "wavy" text. Also, I'm looking for something that says "air bed" more. renderwork (following submission) - I see where you are try to go with this one. Again, try keeping the font on a straight orizontal line. The silhouette in the cloud isn't clear enough. Thank you for the submission, I wouldn't mind seeing this one worked on further.