$60 for a one page design of existing website / 3 days

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by trap, Oct 3, 2011.

  1. #1
    Have a look at this website: http://www.thirtydoverstreet.com/beauty/

    We are going to start doing Google AdWords for one of the services offered on the site – Teeth Whitening.

    The task is to create a page that will fit in the site. We will take out the top rectangle with picture and the rectangle under it with the diagonal stripes and text and instead place the page that you will design.

    We require a PSD file with layers, so the coder can fit it into the site.

    I am looking for a clean, modern, beautiful, professional design, with a lot of white because this is about teeth whitening and because the website is already black and white.

    The page that you need to design should be based on the following page: http://drminnitidental.com/zoom2/zoom2_coupon.html with the following changes:
    1) Top left logo ALPHARETTA should be replaced with the thirtydoverstreet logo

    2) The phone number on the right should be 0203 432 2670. Number should be very prominent, so people can see it.

    3) The blue square on the left should say: That’s Right You Are Going to Get Laser Teeth Whitening! At: £135.

    4) Remove the words in orange saying GET YOUR COUPON.

    5) The whole section on the right of the blue square should be different to what it is now (remove the red rectangle, text boxes and button).
    Should say: Book your appointment before the offer ends on 10/10/2011. Should also say under that in smaller print and in brackets (Your appointment date can be after this date)
    In the same area on the right but smaller than the above (book your appointment) put the address: 30 Dover Street, London W1S 4NB (Only 2 minutes walk from Green Park station). Also put a zoom in of Google maps showing where we are.

    6) Bottom part, use the same before and after picture: http://medellinlaserwhitening.com/zoom_teeth_whitening_before_and_after.jpg please remove the words ZOOM before / after and write only BEFORE / AFTER in a different font.

    Replace the face of the woman on the left with a beautiful white smile (find picture on the web)

    leave in the sentence “For inspired confidence...” but change the font

    Remove the word ZOOM! And instead write “Laser Teeth Whitening”

    7) The small print at the very bottom can be completely removed

    8) I would like to make it clear that I expect your design to be much nicer than the example page (drminnitidental.com), the only reason I am using the example page is for the elements that we need on our page.

    Thank you and good luck!
     
    trap, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  2. ragnaros92

    ragnaros92 Peon

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    #2
    hi this is my try:
    (everything is changeble)
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    feedback pls
     
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    ragnaros92, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  3. mkjones589

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    #3
    I agree with the above poster - something along those lines, but of course more cleaned up and polished looking, since it is for dental, which is an area where your content images should appear very very clean and crisp...
     
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  4. Digital vBB

    Digital vBB Peon

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    #4
    Refresh your entire Code, edit all you need, we have been fully and are stored on ourhosting. This is the Demo for you, if you feel me via PM.

    [​IMG]
     
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  5. ardianet

    ardianet Member

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    #5
    So, you want to Replace the above section with the new design & leave the black-menu-header ??
    any specific size needed (especially width size) ?

    Thanks.
     
    ardianet, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  6. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    #6
    Guys,

    The above designs submitted by ragnaros92 and Digital vBB are not what I am looking for. The colours are wrong, the designs are old fashion and don't suit the website www.thirtydoverstreet.com/beauty/ which is what the design is for.

    The elements within the design should be elegant and smooth, similar to the existing design of www.thirtydoverstreet.com

    I am waiting for more designs please, there is 2 more days left for the contest.

    Thanks!
     
    trap, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  7. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    #7
    ardianet,

    You are right. Leave the top navigation bar, the bottom facebook, twitter icons and the white buildings on the left and right side of the site. Only the middle part changes.

    Thanks
     
    trap, Oct 3, 2011 IP
  8. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    #8
    ardianet,

    The width should be the same as the top broken line under the navigation bar and the hight should be from the broken line under the top navigation bar till just above the facebook twitter icons.
     
    trap, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  9. ardianet

    ardianet Member

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    #9
    thanks for the explanation. Here's mine :
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    direct link : http://i55.tinypic.com/50s0ad.jpg

    feedback appriciated.
    Thanks.
     
    ardianet, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  10. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    #10
    Thanks ardianet,

    1) In black square on the left no need for “!” after whitening

    2) In the red section remove “30 Dover street...” and instead put “Tel:” and next to it put a text box and next to it a button saying “Call Me Back”

    3) On the left top corner remove logo and words laser teeth whitening and instead move the telephone with Appointment to the left. In the right corner instead of telephone put the address with 2 minutes from green park... (that used to be at the bottom of the red section)

    4) The bottom part is much too high, please make it half the existing height. The sentences should be smaller and fit the new height.

    Thank you
     
    trap, Oct 4, 2011 IP
  11. natali77

    natali77 Well-Known Member

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  12. ardianet

    ardianet Member

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    #12
    Thanks for the feedback.

    here's the revision :
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    direct link for full-size image: http://i52.tinypic.com/2lv1f94.jpg
     
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  13. natali77

    natali77 Well-Known Member

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  14. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    #14
    Guys,

    There is a problem with all the designs, none of them looks like the site thirtydoverstreet.com please look at the home page and all the other pages of the site and see that your designs look like a completely different website, the colours are wrong, the fonts are different, the look and feel is different, looks like a completely different site that was super imposed on thirtydoverstreet.com which makes it look very cheap and unprofessional.

    Thank you.
     
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  15. natali77

    natali77 Well-Known Member

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  17. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    #17
    Guys,

    I was asked by more designers to extend the contest to give them a chance as well. So contest is extended by another 4 days.

    Thanks for everybody.
     
    trap, Oct 9, 2011 IP
  18. ardianet

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    #18
    will you give me any feedback for my latest design i've sent you ?
    :)
     
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  19. trap

    trap Well-Known Member

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    trap, Oct 12, 2011 IP