55k USD - my first TV ad

Discussion in 'General Chat' started by mozgu, Jun 6, 2010.

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    Hello, I'm experienced in various ad methods - outdoor, online marketing or radio spots, but that's my first time I had to create TV commercial. It's for bank. I need your suggestions. Please rate it or tell me Your opinion. Don't be afraid of language - rate it as an image! :)
    Here is a link to Youtube:
    http://youtube.com/watch?v=eeXW_tF46U8
    Thank you guys! :)
     
    mozgu, Jun 6, 2010 IP
  2. CrazyDictator

    CrazyDictator Well-Known Member

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    I personally found it boring. Just a bunch of people talking. Why not make an interesting transition from one person to the next? Such as a flying ribbon, etc.
     
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    Exactly!.....................
     
    focused, Jun 6, 2010 IP