$55 Club/Nightlife FLYER Contest!

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  1. Ladybugz

    Ladybugz Peon

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    #21
    but I dunno about the adress :confused:


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    the original res I made it in is 1275x1050 pixels (4.25 x 3.5 inches) I hope it's ok.
     
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  2. bedobeyond

    bedobeyond Active Member

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    #22
    looks good.. here's a couple of suggestions though:
    1) it looks tilted, idk if thats an effect u wanted to do or if u wanted to make it sort of wrapped .. either way its stuck in the middle somewhere :)
    2) You dont need 2 Dolce Vitas lol.. but I do like the bottom one so maybe you can put it on the top
    3) Please change the *must be 18 to enter to .. no star, 18 to enter 21 to drink.. you can put a "/" or a "." to separate them its up to u, its just that its something thats important
    4) there's some negative space in the middle.. maybe u can put another shaded area and u can add BG EURO PARTY or something like that..and the styles of music ..
    .. I do like your idea a lot ..let me know if ur willing to make the changes and upload a revised flyer. Also dont worry about the address just indicate a place for it to be up along with a phone number.

    THANK YOU.
    Bedo
     
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  3. Ariestoteles

    Ariestoteles Peon

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    #23
    Count me in.......
     
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  4. bedobeyond

    bedobeyond Active Member

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    #24
    Aristoteles im glad you are interested in the contest. I have been a fan of ur work from previous contests for others :) good luck!
     
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  5. Ladybugz

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    #25
    Of course, I made some changes, hopefully positive :D

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  6. bedobeyond

    bedobeyond Active Member

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    #26
    it looks better yes. I`ll give u some more feedback in the morning cuz its past 1:30am here and Ive been working all day lol I can hardly keep my eyes open lol .
    thx again
     
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  7. Ladybugz

    Ladybugz Peon

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    #27
    ok :D I'll try to make something completely different since you don't seem to be mad about this kind of style, lol :D
     
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  8. MYND

    MYND Active Member

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    #28
    count me in
     
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  9. topamillion

    topamillion Well-Known Member

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    #29
    Hello here is my entry for this contest , hope you like.

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    topamillion, Jul 9, 2008 IP
  10. adityacool5

    adityacool5 Active Member

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    #30
    mY eNTRY:


    feedback appreciated



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  11. Riots

    Riots Active Member

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    #31
    here goes my first stab at it.
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  12. MYND

    MYND Active Member

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    #32
    My entry


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    MYND
     
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  13. Ladybugz

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    #33
    here's one more :eek:

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    if there's anything missing or being redundant, please say :eek: :D
     
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  14. celek

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    #34
    count me in , wait for my entry, designing now
     
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  15. m4rk0

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    #35
    hey .. i changed the background .. please comment .. :))

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  16. Itaydr

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    #36
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  17. elmasry

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    #37
    my entry:
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    Dolce was typed eclod as a kind of watermark (will be corrected of course if I won)
    feedback appreciated
     
    elmasry, Jul 9, 2008 IP
  18. NightVisioN

    NightVisioN Well-Known Member

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    #38
    [​IMG]

    Her'here's
    Here's mine.
     
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  19. MYND

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    #39
    Any feedback?
     
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  20. bedobeyond

    bedobeyond Active Member

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    #40
    Here's some feedback:

    @topamillion: a lot of differents fonts and colors are used and this makes it a little confusing and out of sync. Also Im looking for something more effective and vibrant. thank you for your submittion though.

    @Adityacool5: very nice and simple but too simple. compared to the other flyers , yours looks a little off meaning that it doesnt match the idea of the type of event. You're welcome to revise it. Thank you :)

    @Riots: Once again a too simple flyer. I have to admit it does communicate the information I want but in terms of layout it needs to be more vibrant and eye catching. Also I dont think you have the right choice of picture with the 2 girls up top.. it doesnt look right to me .. idk. Thank you :)

    @MYND: Good choice of colors, however the ballet figures and the placement of text doesnt look good, also maybe u can change the fonts around a bit and make some of them bolder than other. Thank you!

    @Ladybugz: the last one could've been done good with some modifications but this one I do like a lot, 1-2 small things in terms of text movement can be done but at this point I think you dont have to change anything until the competition is over which will be in probably another 1-2 days. If you decide to make any changes however make sure you save this one as a backup :)
    thank you!

    @Marko: out of the two, the first one is better and I like it. You can go ahead and move around some of the text and edit the fonts.. maybe eliminate some of the white space as well. thank you

    @Itaydr: Thank you for your input. The fonts do not fit the theme and the middle can be more populated rather than leaving so much space. thank you!

    @Elmasry: Not what Im looking for. More vibrant colors, different image and more information .. sorry for the harsh criticism but compared to others, your flyer needs some work. Thank you for the input though I do appreciate it.

    @Nightvision: Looks nice I like the idea the only thing is that maybe the girl on the right doesnt look all that well with the hair over her face.. but thats not a big deal.. thank you for the input :)
     
    bedobeyond, Jul 9, 2008 IP