Contest $50 Vector Logo + Banner Contest - Ends Sunday

here's my shot..

feedback please...

 

@Dante I think I like your first one better even though it looked similar to the Fear Factory logo.

@Cande, looks pretty simple and uses the facebook F font, not really what I am looking for.

@Mr.Legend - Interesting but a little too jagged. Looks like it would make a good heavy metal type logo but not so suited for a video production business. Nice try though. Any variation on it?

@arie - Too confusing and a little too simple for my taste. I see what you are doing with the F's and the P but it just doesn't blend very well.

Everyone still has a full day and a half to get their submissions in. I'm hoping to see some new entries as well. Good luck.

 

mine

 

hi CH , any feedback for my entry??? thanks...

 

@jnjnnino - Sorry I didn't see the 2nd page and missed yours when I responded. I like the colorful one, however I am not sure about the fast forward sign in place of the O. I would like to see some variations on it if you have time. Edit - I now realize the non-colored one is so that I can edit the colors myself so disregard my previous comment. Don't erase the current one but if you have any ideas to add onto the O section please do. Perhaps put the fast forward symbol inside the o or something?

@suke - Interesting but it looks a little too much like "Back to the Future" text and is heavily web 2.0. Any other ideas?
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FYI - I know I have a lot of applicants from all over the world. I am located on the west coast of USA so keep that in mind for the deadline. It will probably end around 9pm Pacific US Time Sunday.

 

thanks for feedback, will try another concept

 

thanks for the feedback..

revised

 

New Entry:

 

wait for my entry

THANKS

 

My Entry

 

@jn thanks for the update

@Mr. Legend - I'm not questioning your skill here, however it seems a little too soft, fluffy and light for my tastes. If you want to take a stab at something a little more dark feel free otherwise thanks for the submissions they do look nice.

@denver - Interesting concept, not a huge fan of the gradient in the middle of the text. If you feel like diving deeper into it and making it a little more refined feel free, otherwise thanks.

So far the leaders are - Jaz, gipanuhotko,and jnjnnino. (in no particular order)

Everyone there is about 26 hours left. A lot of these submissions are great but they are all a bit similar and I haven't seen anything too adventurous. Everyone has pretty much played on the "fast forward" or "endlessly forward" type design, which is good, but perhaps we can think outside of the box. What about having the logo driving through an endless dark tunnel with a bit of light at the end? Or maybe play on the film aspect a little more - though tastefully and not clipart oriented. I have enjoyed most of the submissions so far, but there is 24 hours left if any dark horses want to make a push for the win.

 

@gipanuhotko that actually shows potential to the tunnel idea. I think it needs to be a little more obvious what it is though. Perhaps add a road (dotted lines in middle) and do something with the side lights to make it look more like a real tunnel and it might really work. I still really do like your first entry though, so no pressure.

 

revision

 

REVISED

 

just trying to work around with your concept about tunnel..



feedback is appreciated

 

@gipanuhotko looks a lot better. I think my favorite one of yours is your original post though with the fast forward button and the infinite loop.

@denver I like the bottom one quite a bit. It does seem a bit more like a mail service logo, Fed EX or something, instead of a video production logo, but it's still quite nice.

@jnjnnino - I like this one a lot. Can you try out a few different colors that you think would work well so I can compare them? Maybe a dark subtle one to compare with this bright one. Maybe one on a black background. Also Perhaps a version without the arrows under Forever and blowing up and centering Productions underneath it.

For everyone else, just to clarify, the tunnel isn't a requirement - just a fun idea to play around with. Anything that looks great can win.

 

Thanks for the Feedback...

i'll do the revision right now


denver

 

more color variations...let me know what you have in mind..thanks

 

@jn - I love the red and grayish white. (#1) On the tunnel film strip it seems a little busy though. Do you have any ideas to keep that text but make the tunnel a little easier to see? Your first orange one was very easy to tell that it was a tunnel, but obviously orange wouldn't work with this one. The bottom gray one is easy to see also. Anything you can do to improve it would be great though.