$ 50 - Unique Happy Holidays Web Card By PayPal - Deadline 12/21/07 12:00 PM PST

offiri0,

Thanks for the entry. Your design doesn't look professional. The ribbon with my name as well as the swirled border doesn't appeal to my eyes.

 

Thanks for the entry. First impression is very nice. I like the background of the design on the top. I love the type (font) choice for "Happy Holidays" and "All the best for 2008". However, the placement for my name inside the ribbon irks me. If you could remove the icons (snow man, xmas tree, et cetera) and incorporate the design on the top with the design on the bottom. (background of the one on the top, plus the tree on the design on the bottom, and the "Happy Holidays" and "All the best for 2008" and a better solution for my name, and incorporate silver in the design)

 

HERE IS MY ENTRY



MYND

 

Thanks for the entry. Although you met all the requirements, this design doesn't look professional. You are giving more hierarchy for my name rather than the message. The font choice for "Danilo Lee" doesn't look good. Happy Holidays and All the best for 2008 are too close to the edges (make them breath). The kerning between the two "Ps" are way too open.

 

Ok cool,let my make those changes ,

 

Thanks for the entry. Your design is way too busy. It doesn't look professional. The "Bow-Tie" is the focal point of the design where I thought the first thing one should see was the "Happy Holidays". The blue frame doesn't look good. Happy Holidays and Danilo Lee is fighting for hierarchy.

 

Good start. However, I asked for silver, black, and white. The type (font) choice for my name is not good. "All the best for 2008" gets lost in the hierarchy. What's happening with the negative space in the middle of the design. The design is heavy on the top (needs more balance). Thanks for the entry.

 

nevermind this post, i posted a better one under my post

 

here's another that I made

 

Thanks for the entry. However, your design is not professional. I need more of a web 2.0 touch.

 

how about my other one

 

Is this contest still open?

 

lol
i know
thats the reason i did another

what you think about them?

 

Simply...

 

I'll throw my hat in the ring, in case it's still open.

 

I have EXTENDED this contest to 12/21/07 9:30 PM PST. Does anyone know how to change the title?

 

I'm submitting another entry in just a bit.

 

I forgot to comment on this one. This is a good sketch. However; steps away from what I'm looking for. I need something more graphically appealing with a Web 2.0 touch. The way my name is placed, looks like I was the designer of this piece.

 

I like the type choice for "Happy Holidays"; however, all the best needs more hierarchy. "Danilo Lee" needs more of a personal touch font style. The background needs more work.