$50 Simple Landing Page design (and I mean Simple)

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by staffjam, Jan 8, 2010.

  1. photoshoppie

    photoshoppie Peon

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    #21
    Hi ,

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    please give some feedback.....
     
    photoshoppie, Jan 9, 2010 IP
  2. hpgraphic

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    #22
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  3. hpgraphic

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    #23
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  4. staffjam

    staffjam Active Member

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    #24
    Okay guys some more feedback:

    CallMedaddy – Thanks for the entry – The design is interesting – but It looks like an advert for the site – not the newsletter.
    I’m not too keen on the border – it’s just a bit too dark.

    Biruhato – That’s what I’m after – Neat/professional – each section is nicely and clearly pointed out. I would like the We value your privacy to be a little more obvious (Not too much though)
    I will need the writing to be a little larger and “Clearer” – please see again the example: http://www.taipanpublishinggroup.com/profit-with-taipan-daily.html (I need the writing to be very clear and for people not to struggle when reading – this must be a VERY easy thing for them to do.)
    Now this is just a minor thing – but is it possible to see it with a different background by the logs – so with a map of the world – something that speaks to the Geopolitical enthusiasts out there. I want to stress it is good as it is – these are just further ideas I’m having

    Photoshoppie – Lovely – really nice design – I Love the map of the world in the header.
    The only thing is it seems VERY squeezed – could you make it a little longer – so everything can have ample space (not too much though)
    Also the part: Oilprice.com has very unique partnerships – should be separated from the above sentence – these are all major selling points – so it needs to be clearly indicated that this is the fact. I would also like to see it as it would appear on the page - so a bigger version please.

    Hpgraphic – Thanks for the entries – They are interesting designs- but just not the sort of thing I’m after as the information just blends into one – there is no separation or flow to the information.

    Thanks everyone – looking forward to seeing more designs.

    Top 2: Biruhato and Photoshoppie
     
    staffjam, Jan 10, 2010 IP
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    track Peon

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    #25
    personaly i like better the one with de sign in up but it's you choice. as i see i'm not even in the preffered designs this is my final post.:(

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  6. photoshoppie

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    #26
    Hi

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    waiting for the feedback...
     
    photoshoppie, Jan 10, 2010 IP
  7. biruhato

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    #27
    revised ver: larger font + graph image background
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    biruhato, Jan 10, 2010 IP
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    jnjnnino Well-Known Member

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    #28
    hello again CH,

    here's my try, i know there are lots of good entries that are very hard to beat.
    just want to show what i have for this contest.. goodluck to all

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    kind regards,
    Jr
     
    jnjnnino, Jan 10, 2010 IP
  9. staffjam

    staffjam Active Member

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    #29
    Okay – I’m announcing the winner.
    There have been some excellent designs and I really had to struggle to find a winner,

    The winner is: biruhato with design no27

    PM on the way and thanks everyone else for your entries.
    I will be running two other competitions this week that I hope you will be able to enter.
     
    staffjam, Jan 11, 2010 IP
  10. biruhato

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    #30
    payment recieved, files sent. I trader please!
    another great contest by staffjam. :)
     
    biruhato, Jan 11, 2010 IP
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    #31
    I like Muklus92's for what it's worth.
     
    rr1958, Mar 25, 2010 IP