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thanks for feedback

its my result again

anything let me know

 

revised version 2:


revised version 3:

 

Any changes possible!

Do tell, if any.

 

Thanks for your feedback

Here are my rev:

 

Thanks for the detailed feedback. Will post revision soon.

 

Feedback welcome.

 

Hi, here is my entry...
Feedback please, thanks!

 

One more entry..

 

Will redo the color and logo of back if the front is ok.

 

Hi, here is my entry,



Feedback appreciated.

 

Thanks for your feedback, I will post the revision soon

 

Revision:

The digital flower at the left bottom of front side was created from 4 "Viva" texts.








And:

 

heres my shot. ill call it the black edition




hope youll like it. i made a logo for it too. feedback would be much appreciated. thanks for the invite.

 

@mastermaniac - Looks fine for now. (all entries) Font might need a touch more glow. Can you try incorporating some sort of logo (like the V shield) into the background?

@x2k - Still not looking professional enough. Just have a look at the other entries for a better idea of what I'm after

@Raman - Looks fine for now.

@biruhato - Text needs a bit more flow, and background for membership number doesn't suit. Can you make the shield logo in the background a bit more prominent?

@xhanch - Looks fine for now.

@Aderain - Looks fine for now.

@icebreaker - Doesn't have the professional feel, and quality of the actual graphic doesn't look to high. I assume it's because it's in JPEG format?

@xyuna - Looks fine for now.

@Vasha - Really like the font now. Can you enlarge the image a bit more so I can see the full size?

@killua - Looks fine for now.

@renderwork - Needs a more incorporated logo rather than the vine/plant. Refer to the other entries for a good reference.

@Sabosushimi - Nice design, something a bit different which I have not considered. Can you try a blue background, and have the V slanted? This is so it can be viewed when placed horizontally into a wallet.

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Thank you to all entries - contest will be wrapping up soon. If I have stated that your entry is fine for now, I don't require much change in your design. You may choose to incorporate the feedback I've given to others and repost it here, or redesign it.

If there are any new designs from new members, please refer to all the feedback I have given.

 

I'll do the changes and submit soon..

 

heres my last entry. any revision could be done.

 

Hi, thanks for the feedback. Here is another entry with bigger size.



Feedback appreciated.