$50 - Logo for an Intranet - 7 Day Length

Lol xD, no its not supposed to look like anything, well maybe a modem of some sort but yeah..Ill give it another try

 

New Versions

Feedback appreciated

 

Another quick entry:



Feedback appreciated.

 

revised entry:

 

Thank you for replying, Making one right now .

 

update

 

Thanks for the feedback. Here's with changes and another try.

 

My try:



If you don't like I can try and make another one

 

an entry from fellow Canadian:
let me know if the colors are off, I took green because of the Bruce County official colors and same goes about the light house.

 

less gradient:


and a plain version here:
http://i26.tinypic.com/10fcent.jpg

 

Thanks for the feedback.
Here a new Version !




Feedback appreciated

 

Devan_007 - Interesting look, not sure if it is what I am going for though. I'd rather the logo and typography be seperate entities.
The typography looks interesting, and the dark grey and green look cool.

gipanuhotko - Still not liking the typography, but I think the first version with Bruce County one colour and Intranet another works well. Having the colours match between the logo and the typography is good too.

sarsh11 - that looks pretty cool. I am liking the second version with the blue/green look rather than the straight green. Could I have you put the modem to the left of the text please?

Devan_007 - Your revised version makes the A easier to read, but I think looses something in the change. Could I have you remove the logo image from within the text, and put it to the left of the text? And maybe make it more like a bullseye/x marks the spot type thing, rather than an "a" replacement.

daput73 - Still not sure about the fonts being chosen. Maybe play with a myriad of font examples. Remember, think professional, new, high energy, and bold.

zyndtel - I think your first concept is the one to go with and refine. I think the colours chosen for the font are spot on, but I think the fonts chosen might need some work. Can I have you try various font examples too please?

tajio - A little too simple man. Both in typography and the end result. Maybe if it looked like a server or computer terminal or something, I'd be a bit more detailed in my criticism, but you've presented me two boxes with rounded corners.

Chewysmom - Great research into the project. I really appreciate that. I like the idea of a lighthouse but it should be a lighthouse of information, rather than a normal light house. Think lighthouse crossed with RSS. Also, try to tone down the gradients. The fonts you selected also look a bit amateurish. Great concept, but needs refinement.

CandeGM - Very cute. Might be a bit over the top with the guy holding up a global ball, but the blue and grey you've selected for the type is very nice. Looks a bit though like you threw two stock images together to pass off as the logo. Did you create all the objects yourself? One more thing... I LOVE that you mixed Serif and san-serif fonts.

 

changes applied:

 

In two versions...........







pls feedback sir.............

 

my try

 

Thank you for replaying. About your question, yes I created all objets.

here is my new entry !
I hope You like it !

 

revision

 

here is my updated entry:



-Will

 

my try )