$50 Logo/Favicon Contest for Mortgage Consultant

My try:

 

I'm in. This my other result ...

 

Thank you for all the submissions. I think we are getting closer to the look we are after. Below is feedback to those I have not responded to yet.

@Dante777 - This look is ok, but doesn't really grab our attention. Colors definitely don't work for us.

@gipanuhotko - The house is not bad, we like the look of it. The font and how it is laid out does not work for us, plus the dot com is not incorporated. Would like to see this on a white background with some different colors and a different font and layout of the text. Thanks!

@ideosmil - So far one of the best designs. We like the way the font/text is laid out with the tagline and dot com included. The picture has got the right idea, it just doesn't quite do it for us. Maybe try some different ideas in place of this one. Also, we prefer not to have red in the logo. It seems red has been used the most, but is not what we are after. Also, thank you for showing it in two color and the favicon. You have the right idea. Please show us some other ideas. Thanks!

@raju143 - Really don't care for this look or the colors. Don't care for the picture or how it breaks up the name. If you have any other ideas, please feel free to submit them. Thanks!

@iamgs - Getting closer. Like the lines in the drawing, but don't care for the person. Still debating on the colors, might want to see some other color ideas. The font/text is growing on us and the layout is very appealing. Maybe move the dot come to the left a little or try some other variations of it. One of the top 2 designs thus far. Thanks! Please show us some other concepts along this same idea.

@blankeyecue - Don't really care for the colors or the picture. The domain name seems separated this way and almost seems like it is GreatHomeLoan.com on its own. Doesn't seem to have much creativity to it. Would like to see some other ideas. Thanks for your submission.

@lilianchen - Not bad, but doesn't have the feel we are after. The picture looks to much like everything else out there. Would like to see more creativity in that. Like the way the domain is presented with the tagline. The dot com is a little boring too. We are not crazy about the colors or the font. Please feel free to submit other ideas you might have. Thanks!

@dakouten - Not a bad look, but not very creative. The picture looks like so many we have seen online. We are needing something that will set us apart from the rest out there. Something we can brand. Would like to see the dot com incorporated somehow and the tagline. Please submit any other ideas you might have.

Hopefully our feedback has been helpful. We feel a few of the designs are starting to grasp what we are after, but we haven't seen one that just wows us yet. Creativity is a must and a design that we can brand is one also. One thing we would like to see is some change up in colors. There have been a lot of bright reds and blues, but that isn't really what we like. The colors on the clients website work, plus maybe some olive, navy, rust, etc... I guess the earthy tones work well. I will try and find some examples to share for colors.

Again we appreciate all the submissions so far and feel we are getting closer to what we are looking for. Please continue to submit your ideas and we will get you feedback just as soon as possible. Thanks!

 

here is another try

 

hey,
My revision:

Hope u like it.
Thanks for your time to feedback.

 

@raju143 - I have to say we appreciate your persistence, but your designs just aren't hitting the spot. Don't care for the picture or the color combination. The font is ok, but really doesn't grab our attention. Please feel free to keep on trying. Maybe one of your designs will finally be a front runner. Thanks!

@iamgs - Well, so far your design is one of the best. Would like to see some different font examples and a space between Home and Loan. Also your picture concept is good, but would like to see some different variations of that and maybe tie it in with the text a little more. Balance the height and width of the picture and text a little more. Definitely like the lines in it though and feel we are starting to see some creativity here. We really appreciate all your submissions on this. Thanks!

 

here is another try.which design is in lead.

 

Here's another try:

 

Hey,
one more with some rearrangement

thanks

 

And a new concept

thanks

 

2nd try

 

variation

 

Ok, sorry it has taken me so long to reply today. It has been a crazy day. Anyhow, we are starting to get some great designs and appreciate all the work you've done on these. As these have been coming in we have been working on colors we like. We feel that the colors that would best represent what we are looking for are navy blue, lime green and gray. So, from here forward if we can see designs done with these colors, that would be great. Now, onto the feedback for the new designs we have received since our last reply.

@raju143 - I showed my client your newest entry and though it is your best so far, it didn't work for him. Your welcome to keep trying though. Thanks!

@gipanuhotko - This is one of our favorite designs, but we would like to see what it looks like with the color scheme I shared above. If you could take what you have so far and put it on a white background and then integrate the color scheme above in whatever creative way you can come up with, we would really like to see that. Also, can you enlarge the tagline a little so it is a little easier to read. One last idea we have discussed is seeing what it might look like if you put the house above the text somehow so the logo isn't so wide. Would love to see what you can do with this. Thanks for your hard work!

@blankeyecue - A little too simple for us. It doesn't really give us something that sets us apart and define who we are. Looking for simple, but more creativity. Please feel free to submit other ideas you have. Thanks!

@iamgs - Thanks for all your submissions. A couple of your designs our in our top choices right now. If you could show us what your 2nd and/or 3rd submitted designs would look like using the color scheme I shared above and then maybe replace the person in your second design with a dollar sign or something that would fit the piece. Since this is a home loan site, the client felt that might work better. I'm not sure, but would like to see what you come up with. Maybe a dollar sign that is more contemporary looking. Your the artist, give us some ideas and I will present them to him. Also, maybe a few different font examples for comparison. Thanks for all your hard work and we look forward to seeing what you come up with.

@ideosmil - Right now your first entry is one of our top choices. I really appreciate that you have shared with us all three concepts we have asked for (logo, two color logo and favicon). If you could please take your logo concept and integrate the color scheme I share above, we would really like to see that. Also, we are still debating on the picture. Out of your 3 submissions each picture has some features we like and some no as much. We don't care for the person in the last two, but we do like the circular lines around it. In the first one we are thinking maybe a dollar sign instead of the person. Not sure, but would like to see some tweaks and see what they look like. Thanks for your hard work and sharing your ideas and creativity with us.

Please begin submitting new designs using the new colors that we have come up with so we can see what they look like. As stated in the contest details, the colors used for the logo will be what we use in the new design of the website. So color is very important to us. Thanks for working with us as we find the right logo for my client. Keep the designs coming.

If you are not sure of the colors we are after or the artistic look, please PM me and I will try and send you a couple logos we have found that represent the look we are after. I'm hoping this might give you a better picture of what we like. Thanks!

 

REVISED

 

A different approach.

 

I'm in. This is my other concept ...