Contest $50 - Logo design - screenprinting & embroidery company

Ok, sorry my bad ... Will do revision asap

 

My try:

 

Icon is an abstract of P.
http://i1321.photobucket.com/albums/u560/logoesdesign/logo_zpsbpsmp8t5.jpg

 

Feedback on my designs?

 

Hope you like it, Feedback Appreciated

 

hope you like it, feedback appreciated

 

Wow a lot of new entries came in overnight!

First of all thanks for participating everybody, here comes the feedback:

@katesrobyn
nice play on the embroidery stitches, but with the high narrow letters not too sure about readability

@Kic3
The drop and the needle are good, but as said before I would prefer the artwork as a part of the logo not a standalone next to the name

@cosmin90
basic, but it's not speaking to me, don't know, how many colors are in there? would be some work screenprinting that logo in color...

@logoesdesign
I prefer name and artwork in one whole, not standalone next to the name, overall maybe a bit too basic...

@Dreamer05
basic with a little twist, I don't really see a reference to the industry as in other logo's but somehow I do like it, looks good in one color, very readable

@3SS
A couple of variations on a good idea, the splat of ink and the presentation of the colors as if they were embroidered is nice
definitely a good entry, but with the colors in the 'O' it may be a bit too much, yet the splat alone would only represent the screenprinting...
I'm going to have to think a bit more about your designs

@kainraziall
Nice! Liking this very much, this logo has all the elements I'm after: integrated artwork, reference to the industry, unique...
One thing I don't like is the readability of the letter P, one could doubt if it's a P an R or maybe n... or is it just me?

I think I got everybody some feedback for the moment.
Thanks for all the entries but this contest is not decided yet! Despite I would prefer an artwork integrated logo I somehow also like the basic logo of dreamer05, so this means that everyone still has a shot at this!

 

Thanks for the feedback, Here is the revison, Hope you like it

 

okay i will revise, thanks!

 

Here, with variations, icon (social media) and favicon for your branding

 

@katesrobyn
Thanks for the revision, but I think it may be a bit too much if you know what I mean, makes it less readable, but nice try

@Kic3
good revision based on some of the feedback given to you and others

@kainraziall
Thanks for the revisions, from these two I would probably prefer the second basic P for readability,
the P in the first revision blends better with the style of the logo but the font doesn't match the others, the top of the '|' should be the same as in the R and X
would it be possible to close the loop on the P of your first entry? that may be the best of both?


! I will not be able to give feedback the next 12 hours...

 

Revision, hope you like it

 

http://i1321.photobucket.com/albums/u560/logoesdesign/logo_zps2mnaaoib.jpg

 

New Concept..



second entry


Hope you like it..

 

@katesrobyn , @logoesdesign, @andiholist
Thanks for the new concepts, some nice creations and ideas

At this point I will not be needing any revisions and feel I'm ready to pick a winner

If someone is still working on a design please submit or let me know before tomorrow morning (CET),
if no more entries by then I will announce the winner...

 

OK, I left everyone who wanted enough time to finish, so now it's time to announce the winner...

I went back and forth, as there were very good entries, but the one from kainraziall kept coming up on top,
so the winner of this contest is...

@kainraziall !


Thanks to all the other participants for entering the contest!