Papacita: Not sure if your grasping the concept. Mon: You was more on with your first example, looks like you went a completely different direction this time. Billi: I'm really digging the sun rays you have going on, maybe make them not all the same looking. I'm really liking the text used, But the bean isn't what we are looking for. Please stick to text inside the bean. I like how there is shadowing on the bean, but looking for something more unique as to what the bean looks like. Scroll back through and look as some of my criticism on other people you'll see the style of bean we are liking. Overall though you have grabbed the style we are looking for. Blkstrdst: Looks too much like a photoshop brush and clipart I feel like there was not much thought put into this. Muddy: Digging the bean change, The text is still a bit off, Maybe try a different style sun rays. We are liking billi style, maybe move to some closer to that. Zero Design: Not really feeling these bold colors, The text is still a bit off, Also think there's too much rays going on. Take at a look at billi rays we are liking those. technoguy: We like entry 1 not entry 2, But your a bit closer in color, Like how you changed up the bean to be more unique. Not feeling the text, and the sun rays are good but arnt quite what we are looking for. Look at billi entry to see some rays we like. Contestant: feel like I'm looking at the walmart logo here, and looks too cartoony. Mike: I'm likely the fluffy steam, but the bean and the text not so much. Really like how the rays stop when the bean separates.
hello CH, just presenting a bit different from the sketch... just wanna have some thoughts thanks removed...
jnjnnino: too cartoony looking for something more professional/modern although I do like how you went outside the box.
Razvan: not sure how i feel on this yet. Interesting and outside the box for sure. Not really a fan of the font.