maybe the bean should cover the rays on the left an right so you only see rays on the top and bottom. Look over the comments I left for everybody else to get a better idea of stuff we like. Blkstrdst: looks like something I've seen before and too clip arty. I suggest reason up on some of the suggestion I've left for others. Papacita: looks like a splash instead of steamy sun rays, please stick a little close to the example I provide in the original post. The text and the pepsi wave have got to go.
technoguy: not what we are looking for, the raw are meeh, and the bean i dont like and the text is meeh. As a designer myself, we are not looking for something that just thrown together. We are looking for that WOW effect.
Good Day, Dangy ill keep that in mind and will try to submit another attempt. Super thanks for the feedback.
Blkstrdst: I'm liking the bean choice here, not sure how I feel about the text though, and the sun rays are not what where looking for, we want Smokey wispy, like a fresh brew steam. Bean needs to be bigger then the sun and the rays from the sun blowing off the top and bottom. technoguy: still far off from what we are looking for, color are off, text is wrong not trying to be mean but what about those colors scream coffee? I feel like I'd be trying to buy juice with that thing. Please take some time an go through an look at everyone entries and read all the comments. This will likely give you a better idea of what we are looking for.
Revision. If you can share some fonts style like you did with coffee shape, that would be realy helpful.
Hi Contest Holder. here is my shot. a very fluffy steam, hope you like it. let me know what you think. thanks!