Thank you everyone for entering so far. Here are a few comments about your designs. @all I think an italic font would make more sense, as it's for a gymwear brand and should resemble motion and speed I could imagine a halftone on the font You can alter the logo. @Blkstrdst all entries so far aren't really what I was looking for. Please check my later comments (sorry wasn't able to change the first thread I posted) and feel free to enter with a new concept. @pehulz Thank you for entering. The first three proposals you made aren't really what I'm looking for, however I like what you did to the mascot in the last entry. The arrangement / positioning is a bit off tho @getdomain4u Unfortunately not what I'm looking for, the mascot as the dot of the I isn't a concept worth keeping, also the combination of the letters G and H is not what I am looking for. However I loved your designs in the past, so if you'd like to enter with a different concept, kindly do so @BagusDesign thank you for your entries... The last one (#17) has potential, I like it.you could even make the mascot become the o at the end, but not so sure about what it would look like. Also a bolder font with a bit more motion would be nice. @watari thank you for entering I like the bold font. Could you make sure the color is red please? The halftone effect might look be better on the font... And I am also not so sure about the arrangement of the mascot sitting up there. Anyway, thank you everyone for entering, I'll be happy to see your revisions, great job so far. Cheers D.C.
@Blkstrdst Sorry your last entry just came in... I really like the halftone effect but I'd rather see it on a thicker and italic font than on the mascot maybe But the design concept is pointing in the right direction.
You guys are awesome. Thank you so much for entering. So let me leave some thoughts here: Firstly @all there are many shades of red, so you don't have to go with #ff0000 in your designs, variation is very much appreciated! @getdomain4u #24 is not quite there yet, but I feel #35, especially the mascot, has potential I would like to se the outer lines a bit more stretched out and maybe a bit of stylized motion blur to each side @Blkstrdst #28 is quite cool I really like the effect, but it's still missing something, not really sure what, it looks a bit too unified like the mascot is just part of the text, the other two proposals aren't really a winner imo @pehulz gotta say, #29 is my favorite so far, looks really amazing and will definetly be considered a finalist. if you can think of a different concept you can or course add it... great work! @3SS Thank you for your entry, I feel the concept with these sparks doesn't really fit our brand. Please feel free to enter with a different concept. I kinda like the color gradient tho. @BagusDesign #31 looks really nice, I like the effect on the font, the mascot also looks cool. I'm not really sure about it yet, gotta get it digested a bit more, but on one hand it's one of my favorites otherwise it doesn't fit. What i mean is, the mascot and the text don't fit together. However separately I could really imagine both to work. Like the mascot as a social media Icon and the font printed on the garment. If you know what I mean. @watari #32 the first one is really interesting. I don't like the idea of the mascot being the O tho. I know I have written it before, now that i see it, I don't think it'll work. The rest of the concept is really cool and maybe you can place the mascot somewhere else and replace it with a real O at the end. @me2_me2 regarding #33 I don't know why it reminds me of hellraiser But I think it doesn't fit our brand unfortunately. Also there is a bit of a typo And regarding #37 I don't like the idea of the barbell, I'm really sorry. Please feel free to enter with a different concept. Thank you @all for entering, and please keep your proposals coming. Cheers! D.C.