Contest $50 Logo Contesnt Modern / Urban / Street / Hip Hop styled

my 2nd attempt

 

I like it, dont really like the font on the top one, but the bottom one is nice, migt be nice to see it with the Z matching the same size as the rest

Not sure about this one, i do like the style but it doesnt feel right (will come back with some more feedback if i can work out what it is)

Really like this , very clean and simple.. Will I like the character but do feel the hat looks a little chucked on rather then part of the image

Liking the 2nd and 3rd font styles without the drips, not totally sure on the character but nice to see a little more depth

THANKS TO EVERYONE THAT HAS ENTERED SO FAR! Some fantastic entrys,
If i had anything to suggest at this point, maybe would be nice to see some variations on the character / mascot...

 

Uhm, maybe letters are too distant? And what about the mascot?

I'll post a new revision later.

 

Thank u for the feedback.

 

revision
changing the hood part of the mascot.

 

Feedback appreciated!

 

Here's my revision, I changed the font and I tried another color scheme.

 

Just thought I'd change it up a bit, still plan to submit a version with just a more realistic face if no-one beats me to the win first

 

Really liking the re-entry, would like to see the Sign put in the Z, but otherwise its great

Its a subtle change, but it works well,

Like the font, and the simple hat motif is good too..

The character feels a little sinister, but overall i like it

Loving the little dude, this is the kind thing i was waiting to see, Weither is what my partner wants is another, BUT i like it!

thanks again guys for all the entys and re-entrys! this compitition is getting really tough! I will try and give more feedback once i have a chance to show my partner

 

Great!! Work!!

 

here is my first try ..

 

Here's my revision.

I tried to change the character grin, now it looks like he's smiling. And I removed part of the shadow under the cap.



Tell me what you think!

 

As suspected they really do like this charachter / mascot style, (without the sprak cant)

But prefer the style of font used here * (would like to see the writing on a white background with a red outline / shadow)

I realise this could be awakward, so am not totally sure what to do in this case
BUT if you want to combine your efforts i am happy to add 20% and split the pot 50/50

if not, i suggest re-entrys / new entrys be something using the above as a guide...

 

hope this is what you guys are looking for

 

for me that looks great, will come back with some feedback ASAP

once again, thanks to everyone taking part

 

CLOSING THIS ONE EARLY... TJB10 is the WINNER

(will PM now)

 

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Thanks

 

What but you took my font and my writing style !!!!!!!
sorry was away yesterday evening!!

 

This is not good, I hope you CH do something with that
It's hard to see your effort go to someone else

 

pm sent, comp closed