$50 Logo Competition (LOLO.Com)

thanks sarah , yes i forgot the slogan.
revised :

 

Okay guys more feedback – but before I do – I ask you PLEASE don’t argue in the thread. This thread is for designs not squabbles – if you have to argue do it by PM.

Bodil4o – Nice design – creative and engaging – it will need something else if it will take this though – I’m sorry – but I don’t know what that is.

HerDish – I prefer the top design – again – simple yet engaging – I Like the sheen as well.

Sarah Skilled Graphics – Thanks for the entry – sadly it isn’t what I had in mind.- by the way – I love your skilled graphics emblem – maybe something like this.

Hecky – Lots of entries  Sadly the basic design just isn’t working for me.

Anasone – Always a pleasure to have you in the contest  - Okay I LOVE the design – very neat and professional looking – I can’t fault the emblem in any way. Is is possible to give the letters a darker black sheen? And possibly do a little more with the slogan – I don’t mean garish or too bold as that would ruin the designs subtlety – just a little more.

Looking forward to seeing more designs.

 

Euh whatever, good luck everyone.

 

okay , "lolo.com" is more darker and ive put the slogan in one color and italic:



what do you think ?

 

my 1st attempt

 

hello,
here is my deisgn:




thanks

 

i'll submit mine soon..

 

2ND ENTRY

 

my entry.

 

my try...

 

Okay guys – more feedback

Anasone – I really like it – clean and professional. I’m still not sure about the slogan though – something is missing that I can’t put my finger on.

Biruhato – Hello again. I like the emblem – but the rest of the design isn’t working for me. The second design is also pretty cool – it is simple and fresh – but It just isn’t funky enough – But I really do like the emblem.

Allofall – I LIKE it – very cool and funky – playful and fresh – I would like to see more done with the slogan as it just looks like it’s an afterthought.

Leo Viscus – That’s pretty cool – could you shrink the smily face a little as at present it’s a bit overpowering – maybe use it with the “O” or something else creative.

Ing_Pacz – That is nice – Very professional design – can you try putting the .Com somewhere?

Looking forward to seeing more designs.

 

thanks for your pm..!!
Wil soon enter in other one..!!

 

here you go...w/ dot com...Feedback appreciated...

 

another entry..

 

hi,

nice to see you again..

here' my try..



feedback please..

regards,
Jr

 

here is my idea
no glossy no reflected
all effect can added if you want

hope you like this one

feedback very appreciated

 

Here is my new idea

http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/2249/lolo2copy.png

Please leave a feedback.
Everything can be edited.

 

another idea..