$50 Flyer Contest - Font Media - Payment via PayPal

Entry received via PM from jeck_0_5 and this is the feedback given:

"Thanks ever so much for you entry. I dont think that its what I'm after though sorry. It is extremely dark and the colours seem to clash on it. The logo is also a bit lost in it. My main requirement with the flyer is that its easy to read, eye catching and very obvious that its related to a web design company."

No change to the leader board - its still Will in the lead with graphicsunplug a close 2nd. I'm waiting on one more entry which will hopefully be in the next 4 - 5 hours, and then I'll announce the winner

Thanks everyone!

 

my entry



click the image for the actual size!

 

and Watari comes up with a blinder again!!! great work watari!!

OK feedback:

'The Web Design Specialists' (need to add an 's'), although very bold, doesnt seem to stand out much - possibly because its above the logo and your eye is immediately drawn to the logo? If theres anything you can do to change that, I'd like to see it.

Not too keen on the layout of the screen shots at the bottom - looks a bit too 'square' - would you be able to place them on angles like the Font Media screen shot - not in any particular order. Dont bother showing greenlifeturf.com.au or illuminarta.com.au (I dont like either of those!).

Can you please also change it from Service to Services.

Please remove the commas from end of each entry in the services list

Please change 'budget prices' to 'affordable prices'

If you can think of a way of making the 'specialising in meeting the needs of small businesses' stand out a bit more I'd like to see that also.

Love the bottom of the flyer - contact details could possibly benefit from being a little bit bigger??

I'm only being picky here by the way because I'm not sure what software you've used to produce this - if its photoshop (or can be edited in photoshop) then I can make the picky text changes myself...

Great work Watari... I'm really taken with this one. I think this puts you in the lead although I will print both yours and Wills out and compare them after you've made the revisions.

Thanks for joining in

 

I think of the two, I prefer the lighter/brighter blue used in Wills version

 

The more I look at them this morning the more I seem to be leaning more towards Will design. The reasons being that I think its less cluttered and I prefer the colour. I'm still undecided as to which of Wills designs I prefer though. I like the second version with the white text, but I'm not sure of the header on that one, I think it maybe looks a bit too playful and steers you away from the web design side of things.

Will what software do you use to produce these? Just wondering how easy it would be for me to edit at a later date if need be, I use photoshop and illustrator.

Also Will - would you be able to try and make 'specialising in meeting the needs of small businesses' stand out more some how please, and also increase the font size for the contact details (and possibly the font style as I'm not too keen on that font).

Great work guys and you really are making this really difficult for me.

Still waiting on revisions from Watari

 

Microsoft Paint All done in Photoshop, and should be fully editable.

Sure thing!

-Will

 

Great thanks Will

 

I've just received Wataris revisions - going to give feedback now - decision will be made very shortly

 

OK... feedback has been given to Watari, and I've made a decision!

CONGRATULATIONS WILL... YOU WON!

I'm not sure which design I'll go with yet but we'll chat via PM to sort that out.

Great work everyone... very impressed with you all

Rach