Feedback would be great, I'm willing to add anything P.S: This contest is making me hungry, these dishes look delicious!
Great layout ... the imagery needs to be more graphically appealing ... lack of color perhaps ... the tag line needs more exposure ... would like to see more luxury ... getting somewhere ... let's close a little bit the tracking ...
Favorite so far. Like the second version much better. However, the glyph is quite distracting. I like how you made my keywords stand out. Perhaps, bibimbap could use the same typeface and style that dolsot uses. We could center the domain name and the tag line vertically and increase the size of the image a bit more.
great ... would still increase the image perhaps 30% ... would open the tracking of the domain a little bit ... look at the kerning between "s" an "o" ... take out the "separator" between domain name and tag line.
I like the previous version better ... the equilibrium between the image and text is quite right ... I was wrong about the separator ... improve the kerning on "dolsot bibimbap" ... I care more about typography than anything else ... Let's do "Dolsot [space] Bibimbap"
Alright, Here's another version :] If you'd like anymore revisions, please let me know through PM. I don't want to fill the thread up too too much now
"With simple filosofi (Eat using hand)" and add 3 little image for fokus dolsot bibimbap nurie please PM me if you satisfy
there is definitely a need for typography work there. the current focal point is at the hand. I do not like the shadows on the domain name.
it is very royal and gets to the point to be a bit to much ...maybe the silver color ... and too much red ... the 2nd version is much better ... some typography issues on the tag line ... not too sure about the image ... seems to be a bibimbap ...
good typography on the domain name ... tag line has readability issues ... what throws my off on your entry is the picture not be appealing