Contest $50 Ad Contest: "Get Lift" - Fast PayPal Payment

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  1. creativesperm

    creativesperm Greenhorn

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    #41
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  2. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #42
    New color options looking great. Not sure about the buildings. Shadows on font should probably go. Really has a great event ticket feel to it that I like.
     
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  3. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #43
    I like the new color options. I think the 3rd one with the blue button makes the call-to-action stand out best. It would be cool to see you experiment with the "crowd" picture from the background of the homepage in your ad. Might complement what you have quite well. :)
     
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  4. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #44
    It's nice to see different color options. I like that you used a trophy symbol. Overall here, I think the issue is that the fonts are not very strong and use an excess of effects.
     
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  5. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #45
    I like this. The colors are very nice. I'd probably try to find an image that is less generic at the top. The fonts are a bit weak. I think maybe it's hard to distinguish what is being emphasized. All fonts the same size and competing with each other for focus.
     
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  6. rxzor

    rxzor Well-Known Member

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    #46
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  7. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #47
    Your copy on the right has huge punch. Like it!
     
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  8. rxzor

    rxzor Well-Known Member

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    #48
    Thought you might not like more colors included, apart of blue and green. Really appreciated, thanks. If there is anything you want me to change, feel free to reply back!
     
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  9. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #49
    Let's try replacing "How it Works" with "Copywriters & Designers". And maybe change that font color to the gray from the logo?
     
    jward, Aug 18, 2013 IP
  10. rxzor

    rxzor Well-Known Member

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    #50
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  11. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #51
    Nice improvement. Just keeps looking better and better. :)
     
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  12. bhoduarts

    bhoduarts Well-Known Member

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    #52
    Here is my entry

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    Feedback appreciated

    BHODUARTS
     
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  13. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #53
    I think the crowd image makes the text hard to read. Colors are vibrant. Maybe fonts/font effects need some work.

     
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    brainstormingin Well-Known Member

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    #54
    My entry. feedback appreciated.
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  15. brainstormingin

    brainstormingin Well-Known Member

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    #55
    Another version. feedback appreciated
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  16. rxzor

    rxzor Well-Known Member

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    #56
    If my entry requires any other changes, I'd be glad to hear you out.
     
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  17. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #57
    Hi all. This contest is now closed since the entry time has past. Apologies for the delay in updating.

    I'll declare a winner tomorrow with a few revisions, and then send payment.

    Thank you to all who participated. I'll announce the winner here.
     
    jward, Aug 21, 2013 IP
  18. superrichguy

    superrichguy Well-Known Member

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    #58
    Wow, I wouldn't know which to pick. I like rxzor and xeod versions. Great work.
     
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  19. jward

    jward Active Member

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    #59
    I have a very hard time picking a winner. It came down to a choice between brainstormingin and rxzor.

    The winner of the $50 is rxzor. I'll be contacting you via PM to arrangement payment via PayPal and get PSD files. Here is the winning copy:

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    Thank you very much to everyone who participated, especially those of you who provided revisions based on feedback.
     
    jward, Aug 27, 2013 IP