Contest $50 Ad Contest: "Get Lift" - Fast PayPal Payment

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  1. 5alloda

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    #22
    @5alloda:

    You can probably find good font suggestions on popular modern design blogs. I'm hoping that the designers here will be able to find the best fonts, since I don't have expertise in font selection. The best I can do is give feedback on what works and what doesn't. The font you are using reminds me of Comic Sans, and that may be the reason it's just not working for me.

    However, I really do appreciate your revisions and work on trying to zero in on better choices. I'm always amazed by how a graphic can completely transform when the right font selection is used. A good example is your latest headline. That really pops with the strong shadow. :)
     
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    #23
    so you don't like all the fonts ? or just "how it works" font ?
     
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    #25
    The "How it Works" font was the weakest. The rest are ok. The bullet point list font (green) could be a little sharper.
     
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    #26
    This is really cool! I'll review it again later when I can look at it freshly again. It's possible it might be too much blue, but I'm not sure. Might just be the background making me think that. It reminds me of an event ticket. Very cool.
     
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    #27
    Sure thing. If there is anything you would like me to change, feel free to tell me! I could add a little bit of green to that, if you would like me to.
     
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    #29
    done .. The bullet point list is blue now ... review it
     
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    #30
    It would be interesting to see the [ Get Started ] button matching the green one on the website. However, I really do like your design. Maybe I'll sleep on it and see if I can come up with suggestions for improvement tomorrow. If you want to experiment with any changes, I'd love to see what you have in mind. Very nice work though. :)
     
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    #31
    Hello jward ! As this is my first entry in the contest I'm looking for your opinion and possible suggestions.Looking forward for your response.Cheers!

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    #36
    I tweaked a little bit the first version of the banner, nothing major just the arrangement and typography for the 'How it works section'.Here they are:

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    Again, looking forward for your opion on these initial banners.
     
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    #37
    All of your copies are beautifully designed. I liked the flow chart concept you used in the first as well, but the variations were equally good.

    I might try making the button stand out with a color that contrasts sharply with the rest (green/blue), and perhaps enhance the $3,000 prize with color.
     
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    #39
    Hello jward,

    I am back with some versions of a more sharp look.Looking forward for your opinion on the new banners.

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    Cheers,
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    #40
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    Feedback Appreciated , If you want some little changes then please Message me about that ..
     
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