Contest $50 Ad Contest: "Get Lift" - Fast PayPal Payment

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by jward, Aug 16, 2013.

  1. #1
    Hi all - the client requires a 300x600 ad to promote their landing page optimization contests. Targeting copywriters, graphics designers, and online marketing experts.

    The best ad version wins $50. Fast payment via PayPal.

    Feedback provided to everyone who enters.

    There is a mockup of the ad below with very basic info. Would love to see your full creativity in the design. However, try to make the ad match with the site design. It shouldn't be exactly like it, but should have some familiar stuff.

    You can use any of the text or graphics from the site that you feel are helpful. Here are some pages to help you understand what you're promoting.

    You can read the "How it Works" page here: http://pluralis.com/how_it_works.html
    Here is the current contests: https://use.pluralis.com/#!/contests
    Here is the sign up page: https://use.pluralis.com/#!/register

    One of the current contests has a top prize of $3,000. So if you think you can use that in the ad, please do.

    If you have any questions, let me know. I provide fast responses and detailed feedback. :)

    digital-point-landing-page-contests-aug-16-2013-300x600.png

    Note: Feel free to change the text description (1-4) if you think there is a better way to say it.
     
    Last edited: Aug 16, 2013
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    #2
    P.S. We'll choose on Tues/Weds since many of you may not be working on the weekend.
     
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    #3
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    Your Feedback is Highly Appreciated
     
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    #5
    @5alloda:

    You're first! :)

    Good start. I like the colors, how you stayed with a clean white background, introduced the blue, and reused buttons from the site.

    I'm not crazy about the effects on "How it Works".

    Also the #s in the bullet points are a bit blurry. Maybe too much green.

    With "Your Lift Starts Here", that appeals more to advertisers. This ad is to invite copywriters and graphics designers to join to enter contests & win cash rewards. So may you can make the text indicate that they can win cash.

    I like the idea and the color with the image you selected. It could perhaps be a little stronger, but it's not too bad. Just not great.

    Thank you for your submission. :)
     
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    #6
    I really like how you emphasized the size of the prizes in your 2nd copy. The red really stands out. The size of the cash rewards is a huge bonus, so it's important to make that part stand out, I think.
     
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    sorry i didn't read your comments .. i will make all you notes now
     
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    #9
    I like the direction you are going. Now that you are emphasizing the prize first, that's a very good strategy.
     
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    little changes

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    sorry for my bad English understanding .. do you want white background or not ?
     
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    #13
    Your white background was good. The new background is not that great though, IMO.
     
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    Not bad. In general, I think you have good design instincts. However, your font choices need improvement.
     
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    #19
    The worst font is the "How it works" one.
     
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    #20
    if you don't like only the font ... then send me a font you like :)
     
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