Contest 48 Hour Logo Contest - Winner gets $75 via Paypal!!

Posting these here as well incase the contest holder doesn't accept entries via pm.

Here are my entries. Please let me know if you need the color scheme, size or anything else edited. Thanks.

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@EternalLight - thanks for the entry. It is very hard to read the tag line, and I feel that it is a bit too simplistic. I am really trying to find a creative entry that ties in "smart coupon" shopping.

@Meetmebhai - thanks for your entry as well. Maybe if you tighten up the IQ a bit.. it is hard to tell that the green bar is an I and it also looks like it is sitting on its own to far to the left. The IQ tag goes almost all the way across the Q so that would need to be adjusted, and the gold color does not fit within the scheme.

Thanks! Keep the entries coming I am ready to pay $75!

 

Hi,

Could you please provide some feedback for my entry (it's on the 1st page)? Maybe you have missed it. Thanks!

 

Edit: Please give some feedback on my pm'ed entry.

 

thanks for the feedback Sir, Here is the revised entry-

 

@Ligra - Your entry was nice but looked a bit too academic.

@Dakouten - I did not see your entry, please post it in the thread.

@ft913 - Your new entry has a bit too much going on inside the Q. Now I am not sure if it is a light bulb, clock, what? I appreciate your efforts but feel this may be slightly off the mark.

Thanks to all - I look forward to seeing your new entries.

 

Edit: Will try to submit another entry.

 

@Dakouten - I see it. Cutting out a light bulb with scissors is not conveying our message and I am unable to read the slogan as it is too small.

 

wait for my revision


denver

 

REVISED

 

@denver666 - Thanks for the revision. While I feel there is too much warping going on, and so many things for the eye to look at, I do like what you have created with the letter 'i" inside the Q. I think that if you made the letter i have a light bulb at the top (for the dot that goes on the i ) this inside the letter Q, possibly then centered on the coupon could be enough. Would be interested to see what you could do to create something along these lines. I do not think it need the arrows and scissors, etc. Hope this feedback was helpful.

 

edited.

 

Thanks for the Feedback...
I Will Do Another Revision ^_^


REGARDS
denver

 

@Dakouten - Thanks for your revised entry. It has a nice, classy look, but I feel that a check mark does not convey an intelligent coupon.

@Denver666 - Thanks again - I look forward to your revision

 

My 2nd Revised

 

thanks for the feedback. will be posting my revised entry soon.

 

(sent by pm as well)

Just to clarify, the top half of the bulb is the letter "Q" and the bottom half is an "i". Please let me me which one you prefer so I can improve on it. Also, if you don't prefer the two letter combined, I could separate them.

Thanks.

edit: I just posted some more variations on page 3, I think those look better...

Option 1:

bulb (single color)


bulb (muti colored) - http://i56.tinypic.com/2n6apw0.png

Option 2:

with rays around the bulb

single color


multi colored - http://i52.tinypic.com/23ml8x1.png

Option 3:

a different "Q"

single color


multi colored - http://i56.tinypic.com/30b1b2f.png

with rays - http://i51.tinypic.com/m7n89.png

 

Here my second try....