Contest $45 Logo Design Contest - Artisan Baking Company

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Ok, I think we are getting close. Nice changes to the house and I like the nameplate. Can we make the windmill taller so that the fan part is above the farmhouse for some height contrast. Also, I prefer the windmill behind the trees maybe and closer to the farmhouse. I really like the greenery and I dont want to lose contrast with the cheese. The circular bread is nice, but can u make it with a different pattern on top, a cross, an X, or one horizontal slit to show variation. I think a third bread also(maybe a darker wholewheat one) in the middle would make the basket more full and attractive.can we shift the basket a little to the right or lift the angle of the bread so it doesnt block too much of the door. and the cheese, I want it alot smaller and more in front the basket and the trees, more like just an accent. I feel excited, cant wait.

 

i am in,
please wait me...

 

sure

 

yes.. sir

 

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Hmm, can we reference the design with the silo, I felt a closer comfort level there, in terms of layout. I really want the windmill closer to the house and still taller, the fan to the height of the smoke. I liked how compact the silo version was..maybe make the windmill more slim like the silo. The bread area looks too jumbled. let's copy the silo version, With the two breads, laying one the right,so that one doesnt hit the door. The round bread could be where the cheese was in the silo version, using that same cheese color maybe. i dont like the whole wheat brown color, so you can revert to the orange color in the long bread. The door, I think it is too textured and takes away from the bread, can we just make it similar again to the silo version, plain with mild shading to match the window. Also, the color of the farmhouse, lets change it to the windmill color, I think it could make the logo look warmer and more united. Omit the garlic, and make the cheese the size of the garlic. You effort is highly appreciated.

 

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I like your palm tree and farm house. However, the logo seems a bit repetitive, showing the house twice and I dont see any link to the bread part which is needs to tie in.

 

thanks, designs w'll be revised.

 

Super on the changes. I was wrong about the door, the marked one was more impressive, let's revert to that one. The nameplate needs to be centered. Other than that, a few tweaks in the bread area and we have it! The basket still looks out of place. Let's omit it and fill that same area with another bread ( a chocolate bread, or banana bread to maintain that nice brown color there) Also, can we add a pumpkin and onion in that same area. Finally, I don't know if it would look better or more jumbled, but can we try the sun behind the house and windmill. I could be wrong, but I would like to see it there if you could. Terrific job!

 

thank you so much for the revision, however I still don't see it as the logo that I envisioned. I do appreciate your great effort!

 

very nice, unique concept. Could you work some vegetables and dairy into that logo, that helps tie my farmhouse theme of vegetable breads together. maybe pumpkin, onion, something. as well as milk, eggs or cheese.

 

nice revision. hmm, can i see some thicker vertical boards instead of the thin, horizontal siding on the house. also, i think the window could be smaller and maybe the door larger, not sure, but that window to door ratio feels weird there, if you could adjust it. I I like your bread area, can you add a vegetable (could be onion, pumpkin,greens etc) to that medley, it may look too busy but maybe we could omit something else if need be. Maybe a thin slender vegetable resting next to the cheese, over the breads, green onion or a radish maybe? with the appropriate adjustments, this could be a contender definitely. Also, the word company should be more rounded around the logo, the Com seems crooked.

 

Hey everyone, thank you so much for your participation and a terrific first week of logo entries. I have seen some really creative and unique logos, and your hard work and effort are tremendously appreciated. I look forward to choosing a winner at the end of this upcoming second week as I await revisions on the logos I feel are most promising, as well as those still interested in posting a first sketch are welcome.

 

yes, looks good. for the vegetables, I just wanted one or two. you can keep the pumpkin and put the red onion where the lime is, and delete the rest of vegetables. I dont really want anything blocking the door. i will use that final sketch to judge, thank you