Hello. Shart: the logo is low from the top of the page. please bring this up the text in the shield needs to be tabbed to the center. Please keep it left aligned though. the website address needs to go below the toll free number I have provided additional text which is as follows: Call us and we'll come right to your home. We will diagnose your computer, identify any problems and remove any threats. Further to that, we will discuss the problems and solutions that were required for your computer. At PC Habitat, we take pride in our work. It is important to us that your needs are taken care of. ImJustAGhettoKid: Change the color of the words "Virus & Spyware Removal" to the blue of the logo (add shadow) Place the new additional text in a vertical retangle with rounded corners Place the bullets to the right or left of the vertical retangle Add a top and bottom black border You could place the toll free number and website address in new black border Everyone: looking forward to updates and new submissions Lhlalyam!
actually no. a vertical rectangle.... so that you can place the new additional text inside the rectangle. Then outside the vertical rectangle... you can list the bullets either on the right or left This is a flyer sample with vertical rectangles. I hope it helps. Lhlalyam
Hello. DaveyBoy: Looking good. I love the way you created the thicker black border at the bottom with the toll free number and website address within it. suggestions: remove the black borders from the right and left sides add a little more thickness to the top black border bolder font for the red text Try a different color shadow for the black text instead of the white being used is it possible to have a photograph with someone helping with a computer problem? Wording Change: If your answer to any of the above was "yes" then PC Habitat can help you! To: If you answered "yes" to any of the above, then PC Habitat can help you! Change: Further to that, we will discuss the problems and solutions that were required for your computer. To: We will also explain the problems and solutions that were required for your computer. Thanks for the submission. Looking forward to the changes! Lhlalyam
Here's my submission. The edges have been extruded for the bleed area needed by the printer. Let me know what you think!
I am not assuming that Daveyboy isn't a good photographer or anything, but I think the reason why he didn't and probably won't include a picture of someone helping someone else with the computer is because he'd be using someone else's property. I don't think he would go through the hassle of licensing (and possibly spending money) to acquire such licensees to allow him to use the photo. I mean, we all know DaveyBoy is a good person and wouldn't want you being sued. Stay tuned, my crappy attempt at a flyer is coming!
Hehe, well I may be able to use one from sxc.hu which is a free stock images resource - saying that, some do still have restrictions but we'll see BTW, i am NOT a good photographer
Hello Riftshighway. I like what you have done here with the layout of the flyer. I also like the way you allowed the text to be very readable. Suggestions: Enlarge logo in top left hand corner. To small at present. Thin the light blue curve. The dark blue one is the right size. Add a light gray shadow to the curve - both upper and lower remove logo from bottom the last bullet can be placed as text (un-bulleted & white) in the yellow bottom portion. change the color of the website address and toll free text to white remove the characters http:// from the website address so it reads: www.pchabitat.com Wording: Change: Further to that, we will discuss the problems and solutions that were required for your computer. To: We will also explain the problems and solutions that were required for your computer. Thanks for the submission RiftsHighway! Looking great! Lhlalyam
*shyly shows feeble attempt: NOTE: Grammar, punctuation etc. will be fixed. It's just a method of watermarking... or just a typo By the way, it's not finalized =) *crawls away slowly
Here's my revisions. A couple of versions; one with the photo faded in the background and subtle colour differences. I struggled to find a decent photo to use so if you can find any others, then i'll try to insert those. Thanks, Davey.
Hello. OnixZ100: I like what you have done with your design. The top wavy border is awesome and the same with the bottom border option. Suggestions: The words - "Protection & Prevention from Harmful Spyware & Viruses" would look good in a shield that is tilted to the right slightly. Place the website address below the toll free number in the footer section Mid-section changed to white and use an image as a background (i.e. computer, person helping someone, doctor, someone happy beside their computer...) Wording: ummmmmm..... I like what you did to the wording! RiftsHighway: The changes look great! The shadow on the curve adds a good effect and the words added to the one that states "Don't Wait, Call Now!" Suggestions: the bottom curve and border could be removed (this will help with formatting issues) change the cartoon image to the one on my sites homepage if you could add a photograph of something also, that would be great Wording Change: We will also explain the problems and solutions that were required for your computer. To: We will explain the problems and solutions that were required for your computer DaveyBoy: I love the way your second one looks with the person in the background. Suggestions: make the logo just a smidge bigger is the photograph watermark able to go into the yellow areas below and above? This way the watermark shows in all yellow areas? Lighten the yellow area to match the top yellow area Top black border just a smidge smaller give the top and bottom borders a Web 2.0 look with curves or stripes Ariestoteles: Awesome work! I like how it captures your attention right away. Suggestions: not to sure why, but on the top logo the .com looks a little jagged could we try another image besides the nurse? I like the idea though! The text in the tilted square needs to be formatted better The wording "Protecting your computer and data is important to us. We can help!" can be centered. Wording: Change: Further to that, we will discuss the problems and solutions that were required for your computer To: We will explain the problems and solutions that were required for your computer Thank you everyone. I'm getting ready for bed and will be back online in the morning. Lhlalyam
Hello. What a tough decision to make. I really appreciate the work everyone has put into the contest. I love the ideas that came forward from all these talented people. But, I do have to decide on one..... The winner is: DaveyBoy Stutswiniitscw! - Thank you! Lhlalyam