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Looks better Nicholas. It's a little hard to figure out how the text looks because of the size but I do think its going in the right direction. I like the direction you were going with the bodies of the avatars before, I just felt it was a little too overdone. Entirely up to you but if you want to submit another revision with something in between, that would probably be better. Also the gloss on the surgeon's mask -- can that be blended in a little better?

Thanks.

 

Hi Logos4all,

Thanks for entering! Looks really good!

My feedback
-the guys seem a little scary/aggressive if that makes sense. Maybe you have a way of softening their look up a little? Also make the complexion of the two characters different. Don't want both to be the same. You can look at the original artwork file to see the two complexions that the avatars carry.
-i like the way you sized the text and the colors -- can you give it a somewhat glossy look so it doesn't look so flat?

Thanks!

 

Thanks Pixobox!

-I'm still not a big fan of the bodies shape. The bottom part of it just seems a little weird to me.
-The face of the red avatar's color still seems a bit off, but it is better. Still seems too red. You could look in the original artwork file for the color of the avatars if you want.
-I like the gloss on the text! It looks nice. Could you try it on a less bubbly font? Or show some other font that you think would look nice? Thanks!

 

Thanks for the feedback, revision.

 

working on it

 

Here is my try

feedback please

 

I think I was able to do all that you asked...please give me more feedback on what I should change, thank you

 

Here is a better look

 

Hope you like it, Feedback Appreciated



Thanks
Kain

 

Please wait for my entry.

 

Logos4all -- this looks great.

-I really love the text!
-Can you make the avatars bodies slimmer? I really like the way they look but just don't want them to come across looking as "fat".
-Show me a version with the headband and headmirror being a little smaller on the red avatar. It seems to be a little too big for the face giving it a cyclops effect with the smile.

Really like the look though!

 

Thanks for entering Agent-X. I need to see all designs on the website so that I can see how it will look.

-Your text is interesting and font choice is growing on me.
-Not a big fan of the artwork really...reminds me more of a church hat or something.

 

Nicholas, I am really liking this version!

-Try adding some more gloss to the text -- I do see the fade but the glossiness is not really showing up for me. Perhaps making the text a little thicker would work?

Really overall happy with the look though.

 

Thank you for your entry Kain. Some points:

-I need to see the design on the website please.
-I really like how detailed your avatars are -- are they completely original artwork on your behalf?
-The surgery mask on the red avatar needs some work. It is hard to figure out exactly what it is. Perhaps adding a surgery cap would help.
-The text needs some shine/gloss to it and a little color fading. Right now it seems too flat.
-I'd like to see how the avatars look being in the same plane. One behind the other might not work on the website, and the shadows in front of them would not work in the space that I am trying to use it.

Thank you again.

 

Thanks Pixobox!

-I like the text
-I'm not too sure I like the avatars. They are detailed and look nice but look a little too generic or clip-art like.
-I liked the direction your previous avatars were going more than this look

Thank you!

 

Thanks for the feedback, revision.

 

How about this try? Please leave your feedback

 

logos4all,

This looks wonderful. I really like the slimmer version a lot.

-If you have time can you change the complexions of the avatars a little. Maybe make the blue one a little darker (trying to represent students from all over the world). Play with it a little and see what you think looks best. You can look at the original artwork file for an idea if you'd like.
-Everything else looks stunning!

 

This looks wonderful. I do not think there's any other revisions that I want from it.

Lots of amazing talent in this thread. Thank you to everyone so far who has put in their time and talent!