i tried different arrangements of the objects....other than that, i am out of ideas :-( here are four images- as always, i am also attaching them as a precautionary measure
@Hemp: it would be better if you could stop bumping the thread asking for feedback, and instead check out when the CH was last online. i don't think he has come back after the last time he provided feedback. so you have to wait
well the creator of this thread talked to me on msn. he made me make him about 6 revisions of the logo then left -_-
to address this designer first. 6 revisions of a design that consist of changing color and font. at the end of the day i have to like what is submitted.
first, I apologize for delayed response. both over your designs were very creative. And like i tried to explain to kpeon I think that when trying to communicate my intentions I may have failed. therefore in my next reply I will address everyones concerns.
to ALL designers. my deepest apologies. it has come to my attention that I have not effectively communicated with you all. therefore, I will extend the contest another (2) days and have attached a simple sketch that I did in MS publisher. I want to duplicate this sketch, but make it look more professional. Round the corners, maybe add a 3rd feature to the speech box, shade shadow, etc. Make the box with the "salon" word sit back from the rest of the logo. I need options and dont assume that the first design will be the final. I have gone through alot of your previous designs and now what alot of you can do. So don't cut me short. talk to me. i'm not online 24 hours a day but i do respond. if you want to chat on msn im thats fine. whatever it takes to get it done. once the logo is complete everything should be easy.
: better, the speech box looks like you took a generic box and stretched it. I don't want that stretched feeling. the edges of the speech box need to have a more defined curve.