I don't think you had to make the wave thicker to compensate, but yes, that is what I meant. That's great.
fathin1 - Your lines aren't clear, your background is simple, but not effective. I get what you are trying to do. Compare yours to remus94. There is a quality in his that is missing in yours, though this concept is much improved over your first one. All my best!
logos4all - Hmm, you've given me lots to look at. Thank you so much! MJMdesigns - The first of your two submissions (without the highlighting/glare) looks better to me. Nice overall look. In the end though, I have to go with logos4all. Your final version is the one I'll use. PM me your paypal details and I'll send payment now. All my best! Thank you all for your help. Many of you did amazing jobs!