Contest $40 Logo Contest 72 Hours - Feedback provided

Hello Everyone!

I have a client who needs a logo. He runs a company called Reading Vision that helps kids with dyslexia, so he is marketing toward mothers (please refrain from using pink) and school teachers. He wants to clearly communicate the vision part of it, so having an icon reading is ideal. I have attached an idea of what it should look like. Vector only please!

Thanks! I'm looking forward to incoming entries!

 

my try

 

Hi, here is my entry! (Vector resizable)

 

Off to a great start!

@johnrossgd Thanks for participating! I really like it, and I will definitely show this to the client, however, they were annoyingly persistent about the drawing they had done. Can you make something closer to the drawing?

@ikbelkirasan Thank you for your entry, and thank you for referencing the drawing. While I feel this is a decent start, I don't really like the "Face" and I think the stroke is too thick.

 

not quite what I'm looking for... please refer to the original post. thanks!

 

refer to the original post?
means? i don't understand it.

 

I meant my first post. My client is looking for something close to his original drawing, or a good interpretation of that drawing. thanks

 

Whats the target market?

 

We're marketing toward the education industry, mostly mothers and school teachers.

 

How's this?

 

Hi, thanks for the feedback. here is another try

 

2nd try

 

one,

 

My try, feedback appreciated, thank you !