$40 Header contest

re feedback

sikka2010 - thanks for resubmitting, the design looks much better.

Khirthane - I am looking for something more professional.

])CoDeN([ - I'm afraid I am looking for something different. This current design is not what I am looking for.

Feizar - Whilst your design would suit an adult site, I need it to look more sophisticated. The sybian is an expensive adult toy (> $1000) - therefore my target audience would need to be fairly well off. At the moment I get the impression that the design is for a cheap porn shop.

Thanks,
Brew

 

new try
kept as professional as possible!

#1


#2


#3

 

made for another contest, trying it here



and

 

i do not know, you are looking at professional or stylish...
you have said that old one is not professional and choosed a stylish one... any way i have done next one.....

 

thanks for feedback here is my revised entry

 

Feedback appreciated.
Thanks!​

 

adwaitk007, Chewysmom, Khirthane, Feizar and you_love_me44

Thanks for all taking the time to submit an entry, however you are all far away from the original concept that I described in my original post. I need a plain font for the text and the header has to appeal to women that can afford to spend $1000+ on a sybian. Look at the designs that I have already said that I liked for inspiration. On top of this, all words need to be spelt correctly.

Thanks again,
Brew

 

Heres my entry:



Thanks for looking.

 

my first attempt


2nd

 

revision, thanks for feedback

 

thank you for your feedback, here's another one. Let me know what you think of it.

 

Here is my Try,



Feedback please...
Thanks!

 

Even more feedback

Lady_in_Red - This design is growing on me, even though the font is not plain. As you are a lady, would this design appeal to you on my site?

eCover Designer - Sorry, this just looks like a cheap collection of clip art thrown together. I am looking for something a bit more than this.

Chewysmom - Not a bad attempt, but I think it is a bit too flowery.

jharrvis - A good start, but I think it needs developing into something more.

Feizar - Sorry, this is not appealing to me

bellichi - I like this, but I dont like the way it has been cropped at the bottom. Could you show it to me uncropped, or make the design shorter so that none of the "swirls" get cropped please ? Also, could you make the font a bit plainer

XyaleeDezine - The decorated font makes the banner look like something from a cheap/sleazy porn site - this is not the look I am after.

Thanks for all of the new updates and entries

Brew

 

new font and design, hope you like it

 

www.wix.com/utkarsh2010/sybian-hire
try this header that i built. its customizable if you like it.

 

Here's my try:


Feedback is much appreciated

 

I hope you like it
Feedback appreciated.
THANKS!