Thank you both for the feedback, I was kinda busy yesterday but I'm going to revise my entry today, I'll try some different colors and see where that leads How long is the contest open? Thank you, Bucko
some revisions of the blue version, one has subtext in black as proposed, I've also changed the outline from gray to blue feedback appreciated, thank you, Bucko
Hi, Thank you for the feedback! I have made a new design. Please check it and let me know your thoughts.
@MantisArt: I like the new color option with the orange, but I'm still not convinced with the symbol because of the "Frog toe" style on the serif part of the H. @Bucko: Thanks for the revisions. I am not a fan of the line through the middle of the "Herbers Online Services". I think it interrupts the text and appears more like a distortion. This is a solid logo and I appreciate your revisions. I'm not sure we're going to be able to get an adaption that works for Mr. Herbers though compared with some of the others that are starting to emerge as favorites now. @krisdude: Thanks for your submissions. I like the blue version next. I like the symbol although I believe it may be too black dominated. The text also does not align well, and it might be better served by a different font choice that shortens the horizontal length. What were you trying to symbolize with the multiple rings around the circular globe idea? @Chewysmom: This is an improved version. I like row 1 best. I'm not sold on the swoop in the 2nd version. Also, I think the pastel blue color you are using doen't work well with the darker blue you are using in HOS. I would be curious to see how row 1 works with the text to the side instead of under HOS. @TightWad: Mr. Herbers requested a new color variation on your submission. He'd like to see something that tries an orange tone. However, we need to do it in such a way as to avoid having the symbol part appear like the Firefox logo. You did a great job in your revision to do that. Now he's interested in seeing it brightened up more, while also avoiding the FF comparison. If you can think of any color variations to do that, it would be appreciated. =)
hi, thank you for the feedback, I'll remove the old concepts and if I get any new ideas I'll post it here all in all a great contest with great feedback, good job, thank you, Bucko
hello, a new concept, tried to make more impact with the colors feedback appreciated, thank you, Bucko
@Bucko: It's simple. I might like to see orange instead of yellow, and tighten up the horizontal font width a bit. My first impress is that it would be a little too generic too really achieve standout status or the kind of impact Mr. Herber's wants HOS to evoke.
@Chewysmom: I like the revisions, especially the one with the text to the right of the HOS. I believe this is one of Mr. Herber's leading choices so far.
@TightWad: Great new options. I really like them especially the orange color version. I'm not sure if the black is too overwhelming or not. That's the only hesitation I have about it.
Just made a revision. Thanks for the suggestion, I ve changed the alignment and it looks different now. The rings simply signifies the 'fast paced and able to reach anywhere in the world' internet industry HOS serves. BTW any possibility of knowing the most leading designs now?
Ok guys, Thanks for all the very nice entries. To pick a winner will be a hard descision. I am currently out of town and wasn't able to view all the entries yet that have been revised. The winner will be announced here during late evening my time or early tomorrow. Thanks again for your support here