$40 Business Card Design - PayPal

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by typingmums, Jun 19, 2008.

  1. untitledstudios

    untitledstudios Well-Known Member

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    #81
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  2. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #82
    i am working on new design
     
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  3. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #83
    Much better thanks :D

     
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  4. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #84
    This is better thanks

    Could you reduce the font quite a bit on all of the information in the bottom left corner - and also lose the bold from the personal info.

    Please also reduce the font size of my name and align 'Web Designer' right so that it marries up with the end of my name please.

    Nice work :)
     
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  5. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #85
    Sorry I confused the front with the back so you've edited the wrong one - my apologies. Could you please reduce the logo size again on the one you enlarged and then enlarge the logo on the other and move it up and to the left a bit.

    Great work - very impressed

     
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  6. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #86
    really nice idea with the ink blot dripping into the water!!

    all the fonts seem a little big throughout the design making it look less professional - could you reduce the fonts and maybe use a less bold font too.

    Nice work!

     
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  7. RNHalawi.com

    RNHalawi.com Well-Known Member

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    #87
    hi mate.. this is my first entry... hope you like this.. im open for any revisions. thanks!

    kindly click on the image to see full size:

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  8. untitledstudios

    untitledstudios Well-Known Member

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    #88
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  9. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #89
    Great work - yes I do like it!

    Not too sure about the dark blue - could you try the charcoal black / dark grey that the others have used please. Also rearrange the personal info so that the description (eg ABN) sits alongside the personal info. Also the email addy is actually longer than you have it there because you've missed out the 'admin' part - doesnt make any difference at the moment I know but just in case it effects your design :)

    This competition is getting hard now - there are about 4 of you in the running!!

    Very impressive work everyone

     
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  10. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #90
    Thats better thanks - would you mind just moving the logo up (on front and back) a little bit please - on the one with all the info on (sorry not sure which you're classing as front or back :)) could you also move it to the left a bit)

    Great work - thanks

     
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  11. untitledstudios

    untitledstudios Well-Known Member

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    #91
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  12. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #92
    Great thanks :)

     
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  13. navywife_afc

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    #93

    Let me know if this is better =)


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  14. Carbunash

    Carbunash Well-Known Member

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    #94
    Update: :)

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  15. Carbunash

    Carbunash Well-Known Member

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    #95
    And here without shadow between the gray and the white:)

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  16. deebong

    deebong Well-Known Member

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    #96
    gr8 work untitledstudios :)

    I like Carbunash design too.
     
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  17. raghav

    raghav Active Member

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    #97
    Cards Proposal

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    Feedback Appreciated
     
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  18. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #98
    Thanks raghav - nice to see a card in a different perspective but I think I prefer the traditional way - good work though :)

     
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  19. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #99

    yes thats better navywife thanks :)
     
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  20. typingmums

    typingmums Well-Known Member

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    #100
    This is turning out to be a lot harder than I imagined as there are some fantastic designers on this site - so far the two in the lead are carbunash and untitledstudios - excellent work.
     
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