$40 Business Card Contest - Feedback Given - Creativity Needed - 3 Days

I need a business card for a company that runs a natural wellness center place, its very spiritual and the business card should represent that. Please be creative


Company Name: Vibrational Healing Center
Design: Simple but stylish showcasing the companies logo. White or simple background. Be creative with the typography and make it fit the logo.


Front:
Marisa Secco
Logo
0419 273 501


Small Text:
Color Therapy
Crystal Healing
Energetic Healing
Flower Essences
Meditation
Theta Healing

Back:
Meaning of Color
Like this image (http://screensnapr.com/-/uploads/8R9gfl.png) but be creative about the icons, use the same text




Logo AI File: http://goo.gl/Y7Aty
Logo PSD File: http://goo.gl/nnVCN
Logo font is "Day Roman"


Business Card Specs:
Rotation: Vertical (eg. Business Card)
File Delivered: PSD
Resolution: 300dpi
Color: CMYK
Measurements:
Full Size: 91mm * 55mm
Trim: 89mm * 53mm
Safe Area: 87mm * 51mm


The contest will run for 3 days but i have the right to end it early if we have a winner
I will give feedback on each entry and pay as soon as the contest is done.

Have fun and be creative

 

my entry

 

biruhato: that is really good i am impressed. One bit of feedback i have is that the paint splatters you have on the back dont match the rest of the card. Maybe make them simpler or match the logo and make some petals (just an idea its good as it is)

 

revised

 

Here is my entry:



For some reason I don't know, it lost much quality (specially in colors) when I uploaded it. I even uploaded it multiple times and in different places but it's always the same...
Atleast you can see the concept of it.
If you want to, I can provide you the files for better view.

 

@biruhato that great btw you forgot an s on the end of the word transform (on the back of the card)

@S-Tan that is really good as well, i love the typography

@ax611 it doesnt feel smooth flowing and the colors are to harsh

@dante777 that business card is to formal and templatey, im also not really a fan of font choice

 

My Entry:

 

Managed to get the file well in the image host.
Here it goes:



Would appreciate new feedback. Thanks.

 

Hi, This is my entri. I hope you like it.



thanks

 

Which of this 3 measures are we meant to use, just wondering

Full Size: 91mm * 55mm
Trim: 89mm * 53mm
Safe Area: 87mm * 51mm

 

@JakeKiller the file you deliver to me should be "full size" but "trim" is where the card will be cut so all background detail must extend beyond that and all details must be kept in the "safe area" because that is guaranteed to be printed.


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@biruhato on the front please align the 6 words at the bottom so they look more organized

@MrLegend Amazing design we really love the typography and color but could you please remove the name from header and footer and add "For improved health and wellbeing" to the footer on the front

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@Axe611 that looks much better than your last attempt but he typography doesn't really work and everything feels squished compared to some of the other designs

@puttu im not sure hat you did to the logo but you wernt meant to change it and the design just doesn't not have a professional feel to it. The drop shadows are to strong and the hands look like lightning

@helgaindra its a nice design but its to corporate and to edgey for such a natural company

 

revised

 

@biruhato im not a fan of the dot points now it looks to formal, it just has to look organized not be in a list

 

Please wait me sending updated entry

 

Thanks for your comments
Updated my entry

 

updated

 

Thanks fr feedback, Revision will be added very shortly!