$350 Landing Page Redesign

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by giraph, Jan 25, 2007.

  1. giraph

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    #81
    oh sorry nine - its still not the look im going for, i really like tomeek's and design4u's. Right now I am still trying to pick one, but i think the contest deadline may be extended so i can consult some more people.

    sandeep, yours seems busy/crowded, i dont really know why

    nine, the colors are off, and the puzzle pieces are a wonder to me. also the email field is hidden in a place where people have to look to find it, it should attract attention, be prominent.
     
    giraph, Feb 4, 2007 IP
  2. Nine

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    #82
    Thankyou for the feedback, I can't give up! :(
    Here is another one I've just done for you!

    [​IMG]
     
    Nine, Feb 4, 2007 IP
  3. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #83
    ok..i will revised it soon...
     
    sandeepramje, Feb 4, 2007 IP
  4. giraph

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    #84
    nine, i cant really read anything on the left, but its a big improvement on before. also, it still seems like theres too many colors in that theme:

    orange (dark and light), green (dark and light), blue, white, yellow.


    also make your logo a bit bigger, and change the 1's on top to stacks of 100's, you're on the right track
     
    giraph, Feb 4, 2007 IP
  5. Revamped Solutions

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    #85
    I've updated my entry with the changes.

    - Less colorful
    - Less bling
    - More at a set color scheme.

    Hope you like it. :)

    [​IMG]
     
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  6. sandeepramje

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    #86
    heres my fresh entry:

    [​IMG]

    feedback much appreciated....
     
    sandeepramje, Feb 5, 2007 IP
  7. giraph

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    #87
    sandeep - flip the text/sign up so that left is on the right and right is on the left
     
    giraph, Feb 5, 2007 IP
  8. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #88
    giraph, are you going to pick up the winer today?
     
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  9. Revamped Solutions

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    #89

    Feedback for mine perhaps?
     
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  10. sandeepramje

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    #90
    heres the version u wished

    [​IMG]
     
    sandeepramje, Feb 5, 2007 IP
  11. Nine

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    #91
    Next one!

    [​IMG]
     
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  12. .Cyanide

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    #92
    giraph, how come you change your opinion every now and then, its seems a bit awkward that you change your opinion without any typical reason...
     
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  13. luvlee

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    #93
    My try, just a simple one:

    [​IMG]
     
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  14. giraph

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    #94
    At the deadline, I have not yet decided between Design4U and Tomeek. Both of yours are great. I will post here when I have chosen. To everyone else, thank you for participating, and I wish you luck in the future.
     
    giraph, Feb 5, 2007 IP
  15. Revamped Solutions

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    #95

    Well, considering that im out of the running, good luck to both of you. You two conducted nice designs and may the best one win.
     
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  16. Nine

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    #96
    F*cking furious, mine was way more professional then theres and I am not afraid to be cocky on this.
     
    Nine, Feb 6, 2007 IP
  17. Brinked

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    #97
    Tomeeks looks really nice...good job
     
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  18. tomeek

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    #98
    Thanks for support...appreciate it very much :)
     
    tomeek, Feb 6, 2007 IP
  19. Revamped Solutions

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    #99
    Please understand this, as a designer, you have to respect the contest holder or clients decision, no matter the outcome. Thats their priority and if they see fit, it fits their style. Yes, your design may be better, to you, but not to them though. Understand that.

    Im going to be honest, i felt mine was looking good, but in the end, it wasnt what he was looking for and that you have to respect. Love it or hate.

    Just a thought.

    Take care.

    -RS
     
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  20. giraph

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    #100
    tomeek - can you put in a "Enter Your Email Address To Get Started" somewhere near the email field, to clarify the field?
     
    giraph, Feb 6, 2007 IP