$350 Landing Page Redesign

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by giraph, Jan 25, 2007.

  1. brainstormingin

    brainstormingin Well-Known Member

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    #41
    i will make an attempt
     
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  2. Nine

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    #42
    Here is my second entry :

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  3. Revamped Solutions

    Revamped Solutions Active Member

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    #43
    Will submit my entry later today.
     
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  4. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #44
    Uff...I've been making this for looong time but finally got something to show. Everything was made from scratch, only the pictures where taken from free photo stock (without restrictions to these files). Waiting for any feedback about this entry.

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  5. .Cyanide

    .Cyanide Peon

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    #45
    giraph, when you're online, please reply to my PM i sent you yesterday ;)
     
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  6. Design4u

    Design4u Banned

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    #46
    Here is my first try.....don't know that the design is according to your requirements or not....working on other design ....

    Awaiting for your feedback..

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    Design4u, Jan 31, 2007 IP
  7. DennizZ

    DennizZ Peon

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    #47
    Expect one from me too this week!
     
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  8. giraph

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    #48
    to everyone:

    get rid of the "Why choose " part, and change the what is part:

    Change the "What is" header to "What Is It?"

    Under should now read:

    "People like you, making extra cash with the brand names you trust!"

    Here, you can put in a new header along with new info:

    Why Choose Us

    Over $750,000 cash sent to OrderCash4Free members in 2006!

    (then, under this sentence, include a button saying "Actual Testimonials")
     
    giraph, Jan 31, 2007 IP
  9. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #49
    Revisions....

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  10. Nine

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    #50
    Another attempt :

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    Nine, Feb 1, 2007 IP
  11. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #51
    Heres my revised entry as per your suggestion....

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    hope you like this change...
     
    sandeepramje, Feb 1, 2007 IP
  12. giraph

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    #52
    sandeep and tomeek: can you take out the commas in the sentence in your designs. "People like you making extra..." no comma.

    tomeek: the 1-2-3 seem a bit crooked/off center, can you make sure they line up as well as the text under them

    make the fonts you use on the left side a bit more exciting - vector.

    youre missing a '?' after 'why choose us'

    nothing else for now :).



    sandeep: i cant think of any more modifications for yours, if i think of any i will post.
     
    giraph, Feb 1, 2007 IP
  13. giraph

    giraph Guest

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    #53
    also tomeek, if its not too much work, could i see that with another color scheme? something you feel would work well, while not having it be the same. Maybe try the color scheme of sandeeps?
     
    giraph, Feb 1, 2007 IP
  14. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #54
    heres the updated or corrected one...

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    by the way...which is your favorite.....just curious...
     
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  15. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #55
    Thanks for the feedback...here are the revisions. Hope you like the font i used on the left. I think it looks more web 2.0ish right now. Waiting for any news...

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  16. giraph

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    #56
    nice - how about those colors tomeek, can you possibly show me the different schemes?

    sandeep- no real favorite now, its between you and tomeek thats for sure. i'd say youre neck and neck, and i may end up purchasing both. Also, sandeep - is there a reason there is no logo in yours, and just says space for logo?
     
    giraph, Feb 1, 2007 IP
  17. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #57
    Yes, no problem.I just didn't notice your request...sorry about that :). Will try the Yellow, Green, Blue scheme and some other that i think go well with that template.
     
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  18. Nine

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    #58
    Another attempt! :

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  19. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #59
    with logo now...

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    what u think now...
     
    sandeepramje, Feb 2, 2007 IP
  20. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #60
    Some different color schemes i made. Posting all 3 to combine it in one post for better viewing. The third design is a "light" version. I thought you may like to see it :)

    To all: Sorry for those big files...i know it loads quite a long time
    giraph: Any other wishes on my designs?

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    tomeek, Feb 2, 2007 IP