$350 Landing Page Redesign

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by giraph, Jan 25, 2007.

  1. i_luv_pitza

    i_luv_pitza Peon

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    #21
    sweet....so i'll try to make a new logo...
     
    i_luv_pitza, Jan 27, 2007 IP
  2. i_luv_pitza

    i_luv_pitza Peon

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    #22
    i made two logos tht u may use and which fit with this style...do u like em or should i make totally different ones?also any other changes u'd like?thnks

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]
     
    i_luv_pitza, Jan 27, 2007 IP
  3. giraph

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    #23
    you still aren't emphasizing free cash, its still the number 4..
     
    giraph, Jan 27, 2007 IP
  4. LanceT

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    #24
    I just PMed my contest entry, did you receive.
     
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  5. giraph

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    #25
    i got yours lance
     
    giraph, Jan 27, 2007 IP
  6. i_luv_pitza

    i_luv_pitza Peon

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    #26
    well do u want a different name thn?plz b more specific to wht it should b cuz i m kinda havin a hard time understandin how exactly you'd like it to b.
     
    i_luv_pitza, Jan 27, 2007 IP
  7. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #27
    pls hold on...i am working over it....hope to complete it by today....thanks

    pm sent....any feedback?
     
    sandeepramje, Jan 27, 2007 IP
  8. i_luv_pitza

    i_luv_pitza Peon

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    #28
    how abt the rest of the layout...is tht ok?
     
    i_luv_pitza, Jan 28, 2007 IP
  9. giraph

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    #29
    hey, with yours I didn't really feel like my eye was being directed to the sign up area. It seems 'busy' or 'crowded' with all the different bright colors directing people to look at everything before they find the small email field at the bottom. Make it a little cleaner, kind of directing your eyes to the most important parts (the why choose, what is, and the signup field). I really like the concept though and I think it looks pretty nice if it were cleaned up a bit. Don't change the general look of it, i like the basis of your design.



    TO I LUV PITZA: the rest seems okay, but i don't really think right now it would win. I think a different look would be appropriate on yours.
     
    giraph, Jan 28, 2007 IP
  10. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #30
    thanks for your feedback, well does it matter if i made a little change in positions like.....can i place email field above than 1 2 3 points so that it will be more focussed...?
     
    sandeepramje, Jan 28, 2007 IP
  11. giraph

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    #31
    giraph, Jan 28, 2007 IP
  12. tomeek

    tomeek Well-Known Member

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    #32
    i think i will put something tomorrow :)
     
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  13. giraph

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    #33
    For all entries, here are some additional things to put in so i can have a more complete look.

    1) change the What Is text to be:

    What is OrderCash4Free?
    We partner with the biggest names in online marketing to offer exciting and easy ways for you to make money in minutes.


    2) • Include brand names on the bottom in something like a “sponsor spotlight” (blockbuster, BMG, etc.) that continues to change and/or rotate with different advertisers. You can get the images from here: http://www.hydramedia.com/images/clientlogos/blockbuster.gif
    http://www.hydramedia.com/images/clientlogos/dishnetwork.gif
    http://www.hydramedia.com/images/clientlogos/video_professor.gif
    http://www.hydramedia.com/images/clientlogos/stamps.gif
    http://www.hydramedia.com/images/clientlogos/tivo.gif

    3) Drop the Amazon logo.

    4)• Include an “existing user login” link in the top right


    5)• Somewhere on the page that the user can easily see should be a link to a Proof page

    6)• An opt-out option right at the screen where they have to put in their email. Something like check here to opt out of any mailings
     
    giraph, Jan 28, 2007 IP
  14. sandeepramje

    sandeepramje Peon

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    #34
    pm sent...feedback appreciated..?
     
    sandeepramje, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  15. Nine

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    #35
    Hi giraph, P.M Sent.
     
    Nine, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  16. Nine

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    #36
    Fucking attitude problem. Plus :

    The following users were not found:

    1. NumbaOneYanni

    So come back on MSN and talk to me like a proper Man.
     
    Nine, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  17. giraph

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    #37


    Excuse me? I'm on aim, but I just don't stay logged on 24/7...sorry for that (i guess?). I'm on aim now, if you want to talk. I don't understand what you are so angry about, I haven't even spoken to you or responded to your PM yet..
     
    giraph, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  18. Nine

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    #38
    And NOW you talk to me with a somewhat respectful innocence? Your partner has explained your actions - be more careful when your dealing with Business. I feel like I am dealing with kids here, even though that might not be the case, I am still that 1% that is experiencing the impression.

    StylishNine (04:03:56): This template is unlike any other template in the respect of business I find. It gets down to business and has a clean style; That's all you require and need. You are looking for a Teenager attraction with bright colours : The Idea would have to be more simple, but your idea is a complex business one as a criteria. Your knowledge of the target market is unclear.
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:14): "Your knowledge of the target market is unclear."
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:18): are you freaking kidding me
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:23): ive been in business
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:24): 1.5 years
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:25): doing this
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:36): i know what i want
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:38): i know what i need
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:07:47): and the combined 30 years of knowledge i have at my hand
    NuMbA oNe YaNnI (04:08:00): know a ton more than you do about the "target market".

    Terrible attitude.

    If of interest, here is my design :

    [​IMG]

    I wish the best of luck to whoever will have the patience to deal with these two.
     
    Nine, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  19. giraph

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    #39
    I'm sorry you didn't understand the criteria specified at the beginning, and in the later post in the thread. I did not appreciate you critiquing my knowledge of my own business, and feel that if I am paying for the design, why should I not be able to offer my honest opinion? You left it out:

    Myself: its colorless for one
    Myself: also, im not looking for something so hard tor ead
    Myself: to read*
    Myself: the text is too small on the side
    Myself: theres no images
    Myself: doesnt make me want to stay at the page and read more
    Myself: just like oh ok a popup
    Myself: im not looking for dark or futuristic
    Myself: i want bright and attractive
    Myself: i want to attract the majority
    Myself: and i bet i can ask half the people online right now
    Myself: on my buddy list
    Myself: and maybe 5 will read what that says
    Myself: within 10 seconds
    Myself: i have 30 seconds to attract a person's attention
    Myself: im not going to waste 15 of that on them deciphering the text

    The design is, IMO, way too futuristic for the look i want. I couldn't read the 'take our tour' button for at least 3 seconds, and I spend most of my day on a computer.



    EDIT:

    In any case, LanceT and Sandeepramje are currently tied for the lead, it's a matter of personal opinion based on who i ask as to which is better. Come on, lets see some more entries :)
     
    giraph, Jan 29, 2007 IP
  20. devita

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    #40
    You'll see an entry from me soon.
     
    devita, Jan 30, 2007 IP