$35 Logo Contest. Winner takes all. Hoping to end within 48hrs

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advice?feedback?

right direction?

 

Dacian, thanks for the new tries but not heading in the right direction. Looks like you only read the feedbacks that I left for your entry. I was mentioning to everyone else, the focus should be on American Jersey Cow Milk as this is the most important part of the logo. Those words are where the focus should be and everything else is secondary. In your case the whole logo has equal parts so to speak and the words which I need to stand out more than the rest do not stand out. The logo will be printed at a small size on stickers so that is why the effort must be made so that the words appear readable at a small size. Everything else you did with the logo looks ok, but unfortunately the logo is not suitable.

Sabosushimi: thanks but it's not suitable for the same reasons as Dacian's one and many other entries. Your logo is very pleasant and stylish (very nice meadow and cow) but the focus should be on American Jersey Cow Milk and when it's small, your logo makes it very hard to read the American Jersey Cow Milk part.

 

please wait for another entry

 

renderwork: looks really good. Especially the most important part of the logo (American Jersey Cow Milk) looks great and easy to read even in a small size.

Sabosushimi: I can wait but I must be honest and say renderwork has come up with something very, very suitable.

 

hoping to change your mind lol

 

Sabosushimi: sorry but totally wrong choice for the font. It won't look good when the logo would be small. Also, it's not NewJersey Cow Milk but American Jersey.

 

bwahahah. i ddnt noticed it till now LOOL. =_=

well i can change that. but tbh im out of ideas for a new one. nice contest^^

 

Sabosushimi: I appreciate you putting up a great fight. I am not sure if I said this but if I hired you to do this job I would have been happy with the final result after a few alterations (mainly the text). Nevertheless, this is a contest and therefore I am very fortunate to choose from some very strong entries.

 

Thanks for feedback, renderwork's design is very strong, but if there is still time I can modify my design to be among contenders, do we have time?

 

You have at least 8 hrs from this post as I need to get some rest now (10pm right now in Australia) and I won't be back for at least 8hrs.

 

Heres my revisions based on your feedback.

I have included a

Gradient Version,
Flat Colour Version,
Grayscale Version of The Gradient Version,
Grayscale Version of the Flat Colour Version, and finally
The Logo in small size

 

thanks,I will submit another entry soon

 

MohammadHaja: I was just off to bed when I saw your entry. it looks good (very good) but I am not sure you fully understood my instructions or what I am trying to achieve. They all look good but I need the American Jersey Cow Milk to be even bigger, easier to read. One last change or suggestion that I would make is to move the cow lower to the bottom of the meadow near the bottom edge of the logo. This will give you more space to make the red banner of American Jersey Cow Milk taller/thicker and you will therefore be able to use a larger, wider font (or just simply larger size text) to write American Jersey Cow Milk which will make these words a lot easier to read when the logo is reduced in size.

Now I'm definitely off to bed. I will be back in about 8hrs when I will choose the winner. Right now it's between renderwork and Mohammad unless someone surprises me with an entry stronger than renderwork or Mohammad.

 

OK entering last one
although i doubt it will get me far

 

It stands out.
Is american, much more then renderworks I must say.
Hopefully this fits the bill.

 

how about this?



or this

 

@proteindude
Thank you for your feedback.
Another try :



Feedback would be appreciate it.
Thank you.