Feedback to post #18 graphic smoke I think you would have a better chance with my client by making a few changes. The client said that they wanted royal blue. Maybe "Franco's" could be royal blue. The yellow is a little muddy. I understand that it is meant to look like pizza crust but the red does not look like pizza toppings. So either brighten the yellow or make the middle look more pizza like. Thanks Leland
feedback to post #22 Mr.LeGeNd I will submit this to my client as is, to further revisions required at this time. Thanks Leland
Feedback to post #16 zainadeel It seems I missed giving you feedback earlier, sorry. I like the face concept. It did take me some time to see it but I did see it before reading your comments. I will submit it to my client as is. Just a thought. Maybe a hole above the nose in the shape of an eye?(a side view eye) Thanks Leland
Feedback to post #25 Mr.LeGeNd I will submit this to my client as is. Perhaps the black text should be royal blue. Thanks Leland
More feedback to #18 graphic smoke When I prepared to show this to my client the background goes to black. Is it because you have no backround color and my default color is black? I hope you can change this so I can show it. Thanks Leland
Feedback ideosmil Please remove the pizza slice and the phrase "fresh dough made daily" and the word "LTD." Around the bottom of the circle please put the phrase "AND MUCH MUCH MORE" It looks like you tried to match the color in the example I gave. My client wants a royal blue.(they called the color they wanted "true blue") My client also wants the font type to look more like what they have in the example I provided. Could you also give an example with the yellow in and with yellow out of the word "franco's" Please also make the bottom red shade of the word Franco's closer to the top shade. Thanks Leland
Feedback natali77 They really like your colors especially your blue. My clients first comment was that they don't like white lettering especially in the word "Franco's" They liked your first entry better of the two and so my comments are on that one. They would like to see some changes: Take out the LTD in the cross bar and put "and much much more" after the word "PIZZA" Remove the words "fresh dough made daily" and center the words "ESTABLISHED 1974" on the bottom half of the circle. The font in Franco's more like the flier example I provided. In the word Franco's you have ` instead of ' (It looks like you have a single open quote instead of an apostrophe.) Please provide an example without the pizza in the bottom half of the circle. Thanks Leland
Feedback to post #32 natali77 Please make the font of "franko's more like the sample I provided. Even the color red instead of yellow. Thanks Leland
Feedback to post #34 ideosmil Can you make the font shape more like the example I provided in the link of post #1 Thanks Leland Looking at the font I provided I now see that it is already exactly the one provided by me. Sorry for the added trouble. I will submit this to my client. Thanks again Leland
Feedback to post #36 Mr.LeGeNd The meaning that my client wants to convey is "pizza and much much more" so Please move the esablished to the last line and put and much much more under the word pizza Please also use a brighter red in the Franco's font. Also try this as well First line - Quality is our main ingredient Second line - Established 1974 Third line - Franco's Fourth line - Pizza Bottom line - and much much more I would like to see both Thanks Leland
Feedback to post #38 Mr.LeGeNd Thanks for making the changes. I will submit this to my client as is. I think they would also like to see this with the blue bar under Franco's like in your previous entry. Thanks Leland