Contest $35 Header Contest Easy

lolz! forgotten the phone number. here is a revised version, Any feedback please?

 

My revise :

 

my try - any changes u feel like doing will be done

feedback appriciated..

 

another try

http://i50.tinypic.com/s6issk.jpg



vineet

 

Here is my entry:

 

Feedback Please
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another try

http://i48.tinypic.com/27zy54.jpg



vineet

 

Can I just say you guys are brilliant. I've been away for a couple of hours and I come back to some brilliant designs.
Give me 10-20 mins so I can put some proper feedback together.
What a great contest.
Thanks.

 

My entry :

 

Revisions welcome

 

Ok...Here goes. Once again an awesome effort from everyone. Very impressive.

Vinpkl: 85% there. Your image is striking the most appropriate cord so far. Eye looking over a corporate image with security camera's is hitting the mark. A couple of changes please: Brown background color isn't working overly great. Are you able to create the same image with different color to it? Try blue or green for example. Also the 'bubble' text for Aussie Group Security isn't working. The rounded text is detracting a little from it so perhaps a more solid straight line text would be more fitting. On the phone number tab, when you try different background colors try to ensure the color on the phone number tab suits.

arunefx: Image is dynamic but the corporate buildings are a bit too UAE (Dubai) type 'out of this world buildings. A more normal high rise corporate landscape might suit better. Multi colored writing isn't doing it for me. I really like your phone tab as it stands out nicely without being overpowering.

wenusz: Interesting. For reasons I can't put my finger on, the images aren't quite hitting the mark.

Mr.LeGeNd: No diamond type highlights in the wording. The 'stars' in the writing are detracting from the logo. Love the 1st image with the city background. Remove 'The no 1 Security professionals' and the guy in the suit does not fit the image. Get rid of him. Phone number is almost hidden with those colors so needs to be bigger or somehow more prominent.

vaibhavmeswani: 1st green image is basic and clean. The camera image used on the green background is not clear to someone who doesn't know security alarms. logo could be bigger. 2nd image isn't hitting the mark. Phone number is getting washed out. On both, perhaps a bigger logo.

lilianchen: Thanks for the upgrade. Defintely not the hard hat guy. Just a simple phone image is needed not an original one. No sparkles/stars/highlights in the main name. Simple and clean is best on the 'Aussie Group Security' name.

adwaitk007: Not sure what it is but the image isn't quite portraying what I'm after. The image on the rights isn't working for me, the phone number is sort of just sitting there. Not quite on the money at this stage.

hevipalsana: Not quite what I'm looking for. I get your theme though...I think. Matrix in the background, house protection etc. Just not quite meeting the mark.

Redders: Not quite what I'm looking for as the images are washed out and not obvious and a little too simplistic.

Razorz: Nice entry. Clean. Nice font. Images show a range of products and generally fit the mark but seem to be lacking some interest generally. Not sure how to explain it any better than that. Corporate image is needed giving the impression of protecting family/assets/property etc. Phone box is a stand out but I don't like the phone you have used. Just a basic phone is sufficient. People don't have advanced PABX systems at home to call from.

We are getting very close. Brilliant ideas from everyone. You are all very creative and talented designers.

I am overwhelmed by the sheer number of entries and how positive you all are.

Look forward to getting to the winner soon. At this rate it will only need perhaps another 24 hours tops.

 

hi

thanks for the feedback

as i have submitted multiple enteries just wanted to know that which #entry number you liked and i should work on it.

vineet

 

Vinpkl: EIther of the last 2 entries are the ones I like. They are both almost identical except some arrows either up top or below and the last entry is more clear under the text for the reflective text. I guess it comes down to the size and format of your new font style. Perhaps best to fit the text on one line so you can use reflective text, therefore the last design you did would be more appropriate.

FYI: I need some sleep (midnight here in Australia) so I'll be back again commenting in 6-7 hours. If I could comment in my sleep I would ;-) zzzzz

 

u like something like this ?

 

One from me:


Thanks!

 

went with a rather shy background that shouldn't divert the attention from the name, logo and telephone number and kept the overall color scheme primarily to the green/yellow of the logo. no idea if that is still going in the direction you are looking for but feedback would be appreciated.

 

My final revision :