Flyer Design Contest: Prize $35 - paid via paypal Competition End date: Saturday 6th Sept @ 18:00 GMT Detailed feedback will be given I want to design a flyer for a weight loss program using alternative medicine. The image that we want to use is professional but also modern. The usage of woman silhouettes will appeal to our segment. The information that will go into the flyer is an invitation to use our service with the first session for free. We are using 3 testimonies of people that are currently patients of the clinic on the left side of the flyer. We would like to have images that appeal to wellbeing and beauty. The target is Mexican women, 35 – 55 years old, A and B social class EXTRA DATA The company is a medical clinic named “Centro de Terapia BioquÃmica Celular†and we are offering a new service of weight loss using “auriculotherapyâ€, a health care procedure in which stimulation of the external ear is utilized to alleviate health conditions. Our logo is an atom of 4 spheres each one represents one element (earth, air, wind and fire) the colours in the loge are according to this elements (blue, lighter blue, red and brown) Our target is women between 35 – 55 years old that are looking for an alternative to conventional medicine. I have attached the logo that i would like used. I have put the different sections of the flyer below. Advantages of therapy Resultados Contundentes en poco tiempo Control de Apetito Control de Ansias Disminución natural del tamaño del estómago Fortalecimiento del Sistema Digestivo Tratamiento placentero y personalizado Services offered Diagnóstico Electrónico Terapia Antiestrés Medicina Antienvejecimiento Terapia del Dolor Terapia Neural Medicina del Deporte Servicios Estéticos Nutracéuticos Testimonials - possible photo Mi nombre es Minerva, tengo 42 años y después de mi tercer embarazo pesaba 72kg cuando solo mido 1.62. Agoté muchas posibilidades pero no podÃa bajar de peso. Con Auriculoterapia en el Centro de Terapia BioquÃmica Celular, diminuà medidas, controle mi apetito y bajé 12 kilos en 2 meses de tratamiento sin rebote! Appointments 5679 5467 5677 1357 5697 0098 ¡Promotion: Your first appointment for free! Al presentar este volante Address Lira no. 28 Col. Prados de Coyoacán (Frente a Zapamundi)
My entry. http://img40.imageshack.us/img40/2155/flyerrau.jpgPreview in big Unique design + high quality ready for print Feedback will be appreciated Best regards paladin884 creative studio
Hey, thanks for your entry! About your design As Weight loss (control de peso) is a new service that we are launching, we would like to use more related images about auriculotherapy and women. I like the idea of having a background colour, nevertheless I think its a bit plain. I also liked the curve lines that you used on the background but the colour is not exactly what we want. About the Distribution of the information The name of the clinic "Centro de Terapia Bioquimica Celular" has to be mentioned on the top, preferently. The advantages of the therapy should be highlighted from the rest of the text. The services we also offered should be like a menu of services... something more professional. The promotion is very important!! do you mind creating some kind of promotion star or highlighted it with some other drawing related with promotions? We would love to have more images than text so the images are very important and must be related with the clinic services. Looking forward to seeing more entries.
The size of the flyer is A5 5.5' x 8.5' Half sheet. And its a must to deliver high quality ready to print
I made a flyer for you. Let me know what I need to change and / or what you think about it. And a short question: Is it on purpose that the name of the therapy nor what exactly this flyer is about is not written anywhere? Is this going to be a flyer you just put somewhere, or do you first explain people what it is and then hand them those? Just curious. =3
Revisions! http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/7301/flyer1p.jpg Preview in big If still need some revisions please fell free and tell me only. My file is ready for print. Everything is done to can be printed any where, doesnt matter the factory and the machine. Best regards! Paladin884 creative studio
Hey Van Winchester Thank you for your entry! About your design 1.I like the design of the flyer 2.I love the colours that you used and the organisation of the text. 3.I like how our logo looks on the left corner. 4.Could you change the image of the woman jumping for some woman with a bikini… something more related to weight loss? 5.I like the menu of the services, but they are very big 6.As I said “services offered†looks great! But, maybe you can change the image of the pills in “Terapia del Dolor†for someone lying down in a massage bed, and change the icon of “Servicios Estéticos†for a woman with some kind of mask on her face. 7.The testimonial is PERFECT leave it like that please. 8.I see that you highlighted the promotionnevertheless, I would like it to have more impact… maybe a red should be a good idea and the stars are not really appropriate. About the Text 1. Do you mind inserting the name of the clinic “Centro de Terapia Bioquimica Celular†at the beginning of the flyer, and the address “Lira no 28 Col. Prados de Coyoacán†(frente a Zapamundi) at the end of the flyer? 2. about your question.Yes, you are absolutely right.. the text that we would like to be included in the flyer was a bit confussing at the beginning so the text and the distribution of the text is ON THE MESSAGE CALLED TEXT AND DISTRIBUTION. Thanks and looking forward to seeing your designs.
NOTE: Words between brackets are in English so it can serve as a guide, but the flyer must be in Spanish. (Image of the logo) Centro de Terapia BioquÃmica Celular (name of clinic) (Big letters) Señor, si no me puedes hacer flaca, por favor, ¡engorda a mis amigas! (Big size letters Baja de Peso, Controla tu apetito y Luce tus prendas favoritas con nuestro tratamiento probado, eficaz y confiable de (Bold Letters) Auriculoterapia. (In another fragment Nosotros ¡garantizamos resultados duraderos y una mejora radical en tu estado de ánimo y calidad de vida! pronto tus amigas querrán saber tu secreto. (In another fragment Ventajas de la Terapia (Advantages of the therapy) Resultados contundentes en poco tiempo Control de Apetito Control de Ansias Disminución natural del Tamaño del Estómago Fortalecimiento del Sistema digestivo Tratamiento placentero y garantizado. (In another fragment Servicios que ofrecemos: (Services Offered) (In another text box Testimonio (Testimonial) ¡Hola! Mi nombre es Minerva, tengo 42 años. Mi peso siempre habÃa sido de 54 kilos hasta que tuve a mis tres hijos. Después de mi tercer bebé, perdà control de mi peso y aumenté 20 kilos. Comencé a buscar opciones para controlar mi peso, pero nada funcionaba, hasta que empecé a pesar 72 kg cuando solo mido 1.62. Con el tratamiento de “Auriculoterapia†en el Centro de Terapia BioquÃmica Celular controlé mi apetito, disminuà de talla y baje 12 kilos en tan sólo dos meses SIN REBOTE. (In another fragment) Concerta tu cita al: (Appointments) 5679 5467 5677 1357 5697 0098 (On the right side, next to the Appointments telephones, the address.) Lira no. 28 Prados de Coyoacán (Frente a Zapamundi) (At the end of the flyer the promotion.) ¡Tú primera visita de Diagnóstico GRATIS! Al presentar este volante
Hey Paladin 884 Thanks for your new design. PLEASE go to my message posted today called: Text and Distribution of the flyer so you can include the most impartant information of our flyer in your next design. About your design 1. I love the curve design that you have created. 2. I also like the background colour as its very professional even when it is still a bit plain, probably its better if you can change the colour of the blue letters for something more balanced. 3. The images that you pasted are very good, but do you mind pasting the image of the "ear" as the first image and then maybe you can look for an image of a nice, fit, good looking woman (30-35) as the second biggest image 4. Do you mind looking for a younger woman for the testimonial image. 5. About the “Services offered†I like what you did but will be nicer if you can put a small image on the side of each one related to the services we are offering. 6. About the promotion .. you did a good job there. The other changes must be made according to the message that I posted “Text and Distribution of the Flyer†as the flyer must be in Spanish and there is a missing part of the text at the beginning of the flyer. OUR FAULT. Nice seeing your new design... thanks
Thank you for your feedback. I did all the changes you asked me to, and I also included the new text. I think now it is much clearer what this whole flyer is about. However, if you allow me my comment, I would not add any more text, seeing the font-size is already quite small; and people will have difficulties to read it otherwise. Here my changed design. I hope you like it.
Revisions ! http://img245.imageshack.us/img245/1460/flyer1b.jpgpreview in big If still are some more corrections, please tell me Thanks for feedback! Best regards! Paladin884 creative studio!
Van Winchester Thanks for the new design it is looking really good! About the design 1. I like the overall design, the colours are nice and professional. 2. The title of the flyer that you put on top, do you mind pass it down and make it look bigger?? Perhaps 300% bigger. 3. The name of the Clinic is “Centro de Terapia BioquÃmica Celular†and you just written “Centro de Terapia BioquÃmica….†4. The first two lines that start with “Baja de Peso, Controla tu apetito… etc†should be bigger 300% bigger aprox. 5. The box of “Servicios que ofrecemos†should be smaller.. because the space has been taken by the first part of the flyer. 6. In “Servicios que Ofrecemos†fragment, do you mind taking out the icon of “Terapia Neuralâ€and substitute it with “Courses about Nutritionâ€. 7. The photo of the girl in bikini is good. Do you mind integrating it to the text in amore balanced way? 8. The “Testimonio†is PERFECT leave it like that. 9. The bottom line with telephones and address is PERFECT. The contest had been extended by two days as we had a meeting this morning that couldn´t allow me to send feedback soon, but I´ll be sending feedback later on and tomorrow. Thanks a lot.
Paladin 884 The general comment is, you just caught the idea 100%! Nine notes for your work. 1. We love the fonts that you use for the clinic “Centro de Terapia Bioquimica Celular†2. Do you mind, passing down the sentence behind the name of the clinic and make it look bigger? "Senor, si no me puedes hacer flaca..." 3. In the first fragment there is a mistake… you included (BOLD LETTERS) on the text before “auriculoterapia†and those brackets were a note for you. 4. Could you make that fragment bigger?? 300% bigger pls? 5. We don´t like the icon that you are using in “Ventajas de la Terapia†it looks like recycling. 6. In “Servicios que Ofrecemos†in the image of - Diagnostico Electronico you draw a controller should be a dermatron, you can find it in www.eav-voll.com/detailesappareils.html - Medicina del Deporte you draw a Tea should be a knee injury. - Nutraceuticos you draw different colours ball should be an image of Vitamins, Minerals, Liquid Oxygen… something in those lines. In “Servicios que Ofrecemos†fragment, do you mind taking out the icon of “Terapia Neuralâ€and substitute it with “Courses about Nutritionâ€. 7. Please correct TESTIMONALS for TESTIMONIO, maybe you can change the icon of the “i†on the side for a small cozy videocamera. 8. Could you change the image of the lady on the flyer for something more sexy, perhaps a younger more skinny woman measuring her waist or something between those lines. 9. We loved it, everything else is Perfect! Also please Note that the contest had been extended by two days as we had a meeting this morning that couldn´t allow me to send feedback soon, but I´ll be sending feedback later on and tomorrow. Thanks and cant wait until I see the next design.
Revision http://img181.imageshack.us/img181/8450/flyer1.jpg Preview in big Thank you for feedbacks! Best regards Paladin884 creative studio
Hey guys! Good work from all of you. Currently, all of the flyers are quite homogenous. Therefore, the creativity used are going to determine who the winner is going to be. Van Winchester You got it all, nevertheless the image of the lady isn't integrated to the text. But is a good job. Thank you. Bizzard Amazing! even when the winner design is not entirely my decision, this is my favorite. You are not using white spaces, the flyer looks porfessional, colours are perfect, the images were chosen correctly as our company is based in Mexico. Paladin884 Very Nice, as I told you before, the colours and the design and the distribution of the text is perfect. Nevertheless the white spaces around the images break with the equilibrium of the design. NEXT STEP The last revission will be tomorrow morning 8 am (mexico time) I will take the last designs from all of you and we will announce the winner 1 hour after. The payment will be immediate. THANK YOU A LOT!