Contest $30 Logo for My Store

Discussion in 'Design Contests' started by Khaludi92, Dec 3, 2012.

  1. #1
    Hi,

    I have a Abaya/Burqa Store And I need a logo for it. If you don't know what is Abaya/Burqa, Please refer to the link at the bottom of this post or simply Google "Abaya" and/or "Burqa";

    The Name of the Store is "Asfar2" but since we are based in a arabic country, We prefer that arabic text is ALSO added in the logo. Basically, The logo should Include a format similar to "Asfar 2 أصفر". I have no other requirements, so I am very excited to see your creativity.

    FYI, Asfar Means Yellow in Arabic.

    I will not accept any submissions in Personal Message, So all submissions should be posted here publicly.

    This is where the logo will go;

    1 - We are going to give away keychains or keyrings, Many and many of them and we want to print the logo on the keychains as well. If its something really wide and stuff, we wont be able to execute the plan properly

    2 - Business cards: We only want the reserve a very small area of the business card for our logo, so we want something thats more of a symbol that could fit in easily everywhere.

    3 - Our products; The Abayas/Burqas we make will have the logo/symbol attached on it just like its shown in the picture below;

    View attachment 98875

    Winner of this contest will be contacted directly for future designing jobs.

    https://www.google.com/search?q=aba...A&biw=1280&bih=640&sei=5ha9UJmWJpCJhQfowIHQAg
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 3, 2012 IP
  2. Karigawe

    Karigawe Peon

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    #2
    My try..

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    Karigawe, Dec 3, 2012 IP
  3. ovidiu12

    ovidiu12 Active Member

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    #3
    Here is my entry. 100% vectorial work ! Feedback appreciated ! Thanks !

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    Regards, Ovidiu !
     
    ovidiu12, Dec 4, 2012 IP
  4. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #4
    Not bad at all. Infact I love it but few issues though which am sure can fix easily.

    1- Asfar Means yellow. It would be better if you could include the color yellow in a creative manner somewhere ;D

    2 - I prefer if you give the arabic text a little more priority i.e Equal or almost equal priority as the English text
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 4, 2012 IP
  5. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #5
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    I was wondering if You guys could Convert this "P" to "A" with simple techniques and Use that "A" to blend in with the "A" in "Asfar 2"
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 4, 2012 IP
  6. logoesdesign

    logoesdesign Notable Member

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    #6
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  7. kainraziall

    kainraziall Notable Member

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    #7
    Hope you like it, Feedback Appreciated

    [​IMG]
     
    kainraziall, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  8. digital_irfan

    digital_irfan Active Member

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    #8
    Here is my entry:

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    Please take a look at it and provide feedback if possible.

    Salam,
     
    digital_irfan, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  9. vicky786

    vicky786 Notable Member

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    #9
    Entry For Asfar2 : Open for change any colours,

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    Thanks,
     
    vicky786, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  10. ovidiu12

    ovidiu12 Active Member

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    #10
    Another try...

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    ovidiu12, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  11. vicky786

    vicky786 Notable Member

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    #11
    Another Entry For Asfar2, Hope you will like it,

    [​IMG]

    Thanks,
     
    vicky786, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  12. logoesdesign

    logoesdesign Notable Member

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    #12
    Feedback please. Syukr al-Katsir.
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    Last edited: Dec 5, 2012
    logoesdesign, Dec 5, 2012 IP
  13. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #13
    The logo doesn't look bad at all, Infact its kind of good, but this the concept is old. I mean you do have the skills to give me what I want, but I want something distinctive. I understand why put you the lady their in the logo, but we have seen many of the world's top class brands doing something different. For instance, Hang ten has feet in their logo, Women secret doesn't have anything with bra and panties in their logo. I am sure you understand what I mean.

    I might find it interesting if you put a mango in creative manner. I still haven't visualized a logo with a mango so I am really excited to see one.

    And You need to fix your arabic fonts :)

    I would have loved it if I was looking for something fancy. I need much simpler yet professional i.e. Something readable, yet distinctive. To understand what I mean, have a look at the logo's of some of the major brands out there. This one is more of a cliche, I Love the work you did with "A".

    I am not sure if it will look good, but do you think you could Put a mango somewhere in there and make it looking more relavent, especially with the color combination you have chosen. I prefer more yellow and less green. The background wont necessarily be white, so you dont have to worry about readability.

    Moreover, I need you emphasis further on the Arabic fonts, Since we are based in an Arabic speaking country. Arabic fonts and english fonts should be given almost equal priority.

    I Honestly Don't find it that interesting. Moreover, I need you emphasis further on the Arabic fonts, Since we are based in an Arabic speaking country. Arabic fonts and english fonts should be given almost equal priority.

    Once again, I need a logo, I dont need a banner. This logo would go on our business card, etc.
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  14. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #14
    Its good, infact its amazing, but the only problem is that flowers and stuff are too Cliche. It it weren't very common, I would have bought this one. But The whole market is saturated with flowers in their logos. What I need is something different, creative and distinctive.

    I haven't personally visualized a logo with Mango or something, but am very excited to see you doing something with mangoes. Am asking for Mango due to the obvious fact that Mango is yellow and the name of my company is Asfar 2, where Asfar means Yellow and 2 is meaningless.

    P.S - The fonts are Interesting.

    Honestly, I dont understand what is that other language. I was looking for Arabic and English text.

    About the 1st design, Am not sure whats going on with the logo, especially the two dots. Are you trying to relate it Hindi or something ?

    Design two, its fair but nothing fascinating. Fortunately, We have seen some much better submissions. But I think if you try harder, you might be able to provide me what we want :)
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  15. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #15
    I love the work you did with the upper part of the logo. We work with textile, We want to print and attach the logo/symbol on our textiles (Abaya/burqa). This is good. If we find nothing better, we might go with this one. Btw, Please show me one with Black and Yellow color combination in a way that things remain readable.

    Good work, But to make sure its good enough, I need you to submit one with Black BG and Yellow fonts/design. Moreover, Could you advise me which part of logo could be used as a symbol to represent the company ?

    We work with textile, We want to print and attach the logo on our textile, but to be able to do that, it has to be small so it can easily fit. In other words, I am also looking for a symbol with least possible text if possible.

    I was hoping for a little more creativity by adding a symbol. I mean, I wont always represent my company/shop with the text it self. I want to be able to represent by company just by showing its symbol. For instance, when you see feet, You know its hang ten.

    Basically I am also very interested in the symbol.
     
    Last edited: Dec 6, 2012
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  16. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #16
    A common message to all designers;

    This is where the logo will go;

    1 - We are going to give away keychains or keyrings, Many and many of them and we want to print the logo on the keychains as well. If its something really wide and stuff, we wont be able to execute the plan properly

    2 - Business cards: We only want the reserve a very small area of the business card for our logo, so we want something thats more of a symbol that could fit in easily everywhere.

    3 - Our products; The Abayas/Burqas we make will have the logo/symbol attached on it just like its shown in the picture below;

    Screen Shot 2012-12-06 at 4.14.46 PM.jpg
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  17. muddy786

    muddy786 Prominent Member

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    #17
    My try hope u like :)

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    Open for revisions..

    Regards,
    Muddy.
     
    muddy786, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  18. Khaludi92

    Khaludi92 Member

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    #18
    When I shared the "A" Symbol, I was just giving an idea, I dont necessarily want it! Thats the problem, When an idea is suggested, people take it as an requirement. Its not an requirement, so you are free to use something different and more creative!
     
    Khaludi92, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  19. muddy786

    muddy786 Prominent Member

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    #19
    Thanks for the feedback ..ok i will make the changes soon :)

    Regards.
     
    muddy786, Dec 6, 2012 IP
  20. coolwanz

    coolwanz Well-Known Member

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    #20
    Design Proposition for ASFAR2:

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    Kindest Regards..
     
    coolwanz, Dec 6, 2012 IP