Contest 30 $ Logo Design for Fashion label

Hi all,

I am looking for a logo for a new fashion label. It should be black and white and vector as it will be printed very big and very small. The name of the label is

First is Free

We offer Jewellery and Watches.

I am looking for two files, one with logo only and one with the company name "first is free". The Logo will be printed/engraved onto watches and Jewelery, so will need to scale well.

Contest runs for 5 days, I might extend it for 2 days.

PAYMENT: Paypal

Cheers

UNOME

 

I'm working on it

 

Here is my entry.

Feedback appreciated. Thank you.

 

Some Feedback
@dikoka I quite like the idea of the overlay Fs, however the font reminds me to much of the Tesco Clothing line font

@madeinEurope
I quite like the logo, however I am unsure of the the font underneath. Are you able to demo the logo on a watch?


@ Playaone - This is possibly a bit feminine for use on Mens watches/Jewlery

 

I hope there is no need for a small reminder: if the sign is good, we have thousands of font options to pick from, and also sizes, positions, readability, thickness...



I used original vector files here. Will tweak for very small sizes after feedback.

 

@ plain - Sorry, I accidentally deleted some of my responses. It should have read "This is possibly a bit feminine for use in Mens watches/Jewlery, however I like the art Deco style"

@ MadeinEurope - Would it be possible to remove the text from the watch demos (logo only). My one reservation with this design, is that it might look a little too modern.

 

@Dreamer05 the F in your logo, looks to similar to the facebook F

 

I made a few versions of the concept. Please let me know if you like any of these. Thanks.

 

Have tried to make it less modern. Didn't came well, but I post it (right) just for reference.

 

Mi choice would be this, because the logo is visible in most clock-hands positions. Not to mention "diamond" in shape.

 

my try

 

my try

 

@madeinEurope Your last entry is my favorite of your entries as well... Will think about it
@johnrossgd one of my favorites so far, please could you send me an example with the "free" upside down?
@puttu sorry, but this isn't really the style I am after
@Saidbenssi your entry is interesting, would it be possible to demo it on a watch face?
@dikoka sorry man, again, not what I am looking for, still don't like the font
@Dreamer05 the "F"s still look to facebook and together look like an A

 

@unome thanks. like this?

 

@johnrossgd

Yes, just like that. Thanks